Hellooo... Long day!! But I thought I would post!! Feedback always welcome... especially from you guys, because you crack me up!!

Oh, funny tidbit... I was actually in Metropolis just yesterday, lol... I worked this past year at The WB (where ick-ick-no-offense-if-you-like-it-Smallville airs), and went to meet a friend from there for lunch at Warner Bros. main lot. that's where metropolis was mainly; you can still clearly see the theater and where the kerths were, and the main city streets and the old Planet structure and the outside of L&C's apartment buildings. It makes me miss it soooo much and think about where I was ten years ago when it was in full-swing!!! Anyway seeing it made me want to write and write... and as a result, this story is VERY close to being done!! Since it's taken me FOREVER to write, as I have gone away from it to work on and finish other stories when i had writer's block for this one, I am so glad to be re-inspired!!

He's avoiding Lois because he thinks she's married to Luthor

I hope sunlight helps

Jose

sunlight and... ahh, FAITH!! lol, kidding

Jose you're quick! I just posted that!!!

Still reading this, Nicole, and enjoying the Lois/Martha scenes very much indeed. Nice to see that Lois now realises what she had and what she threw away. I just hope that she's not too late!

I have to confess that the Jor-El intervention feels a little... bizarre to me, so I'm not enjoying that part of the story as much. But I'll persevere!


Wendy

Hi!

Wonderful story and great part!

Now, only one thing: he needs to see Lois!!! Urgent! He needs of her more than sunlinght !

More SOON!!!

Andreia

Awwwwwwww

MDL. (who goes under strike here if she doesnt receive her button soon. Er... yeah, right! )

OMG!!!!!!!!!

Pulling strength from each other, the three of them walked toward Room 203

This is so sad...But Clark will see Lois on his side and he will know that she loves him and that she didn´t get married....I hope

Do something soon because I am loosing my mind(more if that is even possible
)

Karla(who wants moreeeeeeee)

Hi,

Great part. Beautiful! Is a good thing Henderson ask S.T.A.R. Labs for the help.

Finally they Kent's can be there with their son.

No way, I'm not taking a president title! /me runs and hides. I'm just a lowly artist! But I'll still make you a button.


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Meanwhile, hmm, I'm still going to conjure up some faith that you haven't completely killed off Clark. I look forward to the next part!

Jen

My button arrived!!!!

{{{sigh}}} this is soo sad I just can't help it

So, make him better soon, okay?!

More soon, I love that we are getting Clark's side of the story also. Laura

Hi,

Just caught up with this story and wanted to say I'm enjoying it.

Please, please let Lois and the Kents not be too late to save Clark.

Yours Jenni

Hi,

I'm another one who has just caught up. What a great story!

But you are breaking my heart here! How sad that Clark is misinterpreting everything he sees. Come back and fix this!

I loved Lois' conversation with the Kents.

Please post more! Soon!

- Vicki

Tah Toh, You were the perfect excuse to avoid dishes, laundry and the myriad of other tasks I was suppose to do. Seriously enjoying this, scared, but enjoying it biting nails. Especially the Lois parts. :-)

Thanks for the feedback, guys!! Sorry it's a rollercoaster, lol... but please stay for the rest of the ride

I'll post part 7 soon!!!!