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Posted By: daneel FDK-Twins: 21/? - 10/28/04 11:40 PM
Good part!! smile1
Posted By: Vicki Re: FDK-Twins: 21/? - 10/29/04 03:09 AM
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"Maybe because you're both Kryptonians. Or maybe because you're twins. What's he feeling now?"

Brian was silent for a long minute. "I think he's asleep," he said.
For a moment there, I thought maybe Clark would be back home, mooning over Lois, and Brian would tell her! smile1 But, no, he was asleep. LOL (Very 'Lois' of her to ask, though! laugh )

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Brian seemed to think about that for some seconds. "I don't like to feel sick," he said. "I can't fly as fast anymore, and I ache. My head hurts a little, too."
Yikes! I thought he was going to drop her! goofy
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"I think," Clark said obscurely, "that I was worrying unnecessarily." He glanced at Brian. "Be sure nobody sees you drop her off."
I absolutely loved this! I can just see him doing and saying this! Clark really doesn't know how to react to Lois' non-reaction!

Great part, Nan! thumbsup

- Vicki
Posted By: ChiefPam Re: FDK-Twins: 21/? - 10/29/04 04:15 AM
This was great... I'm anxiously awaiting L&C's "talk" but I like Brian, too, so I'm glad to get him reassured. Like Vicki, I was worried when he said he wasn't feeling so good! But I hope his powers will fade slowly enough that they'll realize not to trust them.

And Clark sure has a lot to think about laugh Which is only fair; Lois has been thinking like mad for the last two days... he'll need to catch up.

PJ
Posted By: Gabriele Re: FDK-Twins: 21/? - 10/29/04 09:51 AM
It seems to me that Lois made a great job being a big sister to Brian. I don't think he will be a problem to Lois and Clark's relationship.

But you must stop letting him sense Clark's feelings - it may become an intrusion to his privacy when his relationship with Lois deepens.

Clark must be feel comfortable with Lois knowing his secret, otherwise he wouldn't let his glasses out.

Eagerly waiting for more.
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: FDK-Twins: 21/? - 10/29/04 03:23 PM
Hi,

Great part. hyper
Posted By: Tank Re: FDK-Twins: 21/? - 10/29/04 06:46 PM
Good instalment.

I'm curious as to what the 'complications' that Klein mentioned entail. I hope it's something really weird, like the clone winds up a female or something. I just can't see it working out with two Clark Kents and two Superman running around.

Maybe he'll disolve into a large puddle of beige goo.

Tank (who thinks it would be quite awkward if the clone starts hitting on Lois)
Posted By: Supes1fan Re: FDK-Twins: 21/? - 10/29/04 07:12 PM
Glad this story is back Nan! thumbsup

I'm interested to see what's the big 'if' that Dr. Klein keeps hinting at. Can Brian really keep his powers?

More soon!

~Liz
Posted By: TriciaW Re: FDK-Twins: 21/? - 10/29/04 08:46 PM
Nan

A fantastic part! smile1

Tricia cool
Posted By: Nan Re: FDK-Twins: 21/? - 10/29/04 09:55 PM
Don't worry, Tank, I think I can finish this and make everyone happy -- except those who want ultimate death, disaster and doom. I don't do those. laugh

I know I'm taking a very long time between posts, but my writing time has been dramatically shrunk. I've been babysitting my youngest grandson, now 5 months old, and babies take an enormous amount of time, but I haven't quit the story. It has simply slowed down. You may or may not have picked up the clue, but we're approaching the dramatic ending (no, it will not be the next part, but we're starting to set up for it). To those who didn't see it before: I have always promised that once I start a story I *will* finish it. I don't leave readers hanging. I know how I feel when others do it to me, and I don't inflict that on anyone, so "Twins" will be finished. It's just taking longer than I expected at first.

Nan
Posted By: LaurieD Re: FDK-Twins: 21/? - 10/30/04 10:46 AM
Thanks, Nan, for the wonderful, creative story. Keep up the work and we'll be patient with your pace. LaurieD cool
Posted By: Simona Re: FDK-Twins: 21/? - 11/09/04 11:52 AM
just caught up with your amazing story, Nan, and I'm looking forward to know how are you going to solve this mess: two Supermen+Clark's twin?? you're hinting Brian's powers are fading, so this problem is solving itself, but what about Brian himself(whom I adore, poor darling)?
I guess I have just to wait fot the next part!
Please post as soon as you can,

Simona smile
Posted By: Nan Re: FDK-Twins: 21/? - 11/09/04 02:19 PM
I'm working on it, I promise, and with any luck will have the next part up today or tomorrow.

Nan
Posted By: Mister Data Re: FDK-Twins: 21/? - 11/09/04 03:44 PM
I am stuck at work tonight...today would be really good...
hyper
James
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