I think your idea has merit. However, in order to read your story, I have to have some periods inserted. I guess you probably have problems with the keyboard, but if you could read it over aloud and fix all the runon sentences, I think I could make some sense out of your story. I was only able to read the first couple of paragraphs before I gave up on deciphering.

It was nice that Albus came to L&C. I wondered at first if they were going to go to Hogwarts. I'm interested in reading this story after you're done with the grammar check and punctuation.


Nancy

RodStewFan,
I had no such trouble. I thought your story was GREAT! Can't wait to read more.


Juanita

This isn't bad, but I agree that it could be beta'd. I like the idea.

Hi
I think this idea is great.Please, please write some more.I am a huge HP fan and a huge LC fan.I can't wait for Harry to meet Lois and Clark.

Bye