Great Nan! I love the petulant, childlike Brian played by Clark. Hurrah, now that the lock of hair is gone. I guess Lois is safe while at the opera, though I wish she were not with Lex.

Your characterizations are excellent!

LaurieD

Nice Nan! Peanut butter and jelly indeed!

Oh, I loved the "Clark-as-Brian" scene And the whole thing continues to be wonderful.

More, more, more! <g>

PJ

LOL!

Another solid instalment.

Everything went just as they planned... what's up with that? It can't be that easy... can it? I mean, Lois is out with Lex, so something has to go terribly wrong. I mean, this is Lex, and that means whams. Big, nasty WHAMS!

I think I speak for all the gentle readers when I say we are overdue for a huge, and terrible wham.

Tank (who would graciously accept a haircut for Lois in lieu of one of the whams)

Hi Nan,

I loved this part, and I agree with all the other comments. Clark did a great job playing the part of Brian.

I'll feel happier when Lois gets back home from her date with Lex. I just don't trust that creep!

Yours Jenni

Nan - I'm now all caught up on this story and just wanted to add my voice to the others in telling you how wonderful it is. I also loved the Clark-as-Brian scene, and I liked the way that you had Clark take the lead-lined box with him. I assume that it contains some of that pesky kryptonite, so it would be very nice to get that out of Lex's hands nice and early. Hopefully Clark won't be stupid enough to open it...

But unfortunately, like Tank, I'm worried that this was too easy. I'm not asking for a wham - or a haircut - but I fear that some serious (dare I say perilous) predicament will indeed arise before this story comes to a close.

Kathy

Nan

This is great.

Tricia

Ditto to the Clark as Brian scene and ditto to concerns that this story is going too easily.

James

Hi,

Great part.

Ok, let me see if I've got this straight... I'm supposed to read Part 17 before reading Part 18?

I liked this part. Fast and clever thinking on Clark's part. Peanut butter and jelly sandwich, lol

And, I can see now that the box clearly does not contain his lock of hair!

Ok, now I'm all caught up, everything makes sense, and I'm looking forward to Part 19!

- Vicki