FDK: Waking a Miracle (11/??) - 09/16/04 02:52 PM
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Thanks again!!!
Thanks again!!!
Re: FDK: Waking a Miracle (11/??) - 09/17/04 12:23 AM
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"The diner down the street!?" Lucy had cried, flailing her arms wildly. "Do you have any idea who the heck resides in a city diner at 3 AM in the morning on a work night!?"
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Carol Fout from the Star was listing so badly she looked drunk. And one of the cameramen nearby appeared to be taking pictures of his shoes, inadvertently of course.
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George Thompson, she thought, I'll have you on the front page in no time.
Sara
Re: FDK: Waking a Miracle (11/??) - 09/17/04 01:06 AM
Why do I suspect Lois is going to finish falling from a plane? 
Jose
Jose
Re: FDK: Waking a Miracle (11/??) - 09/17/04 04:35 PM
Great part!! 
Re: FDK: Waking a Miracle (11/??) - 09/18/04 08:14 AM
I'd say Lois seems quite confused.
I have to feel sorry for Lucy who was left, forgotten, in that sleezy diner. Nice sister she has.
Who will break first. Will Clark give in to Lois' determined pushing, or will Lois give up on Clark and pursue Trask on her own on get into trouble (Lois? nah, she'd never do that)
Tank (who wonders where Lucy will be sent next time)
I have to feel sorry for Lucy who was left, forgotten, in that sleezy diner. Nice sister she has.
Who will break first. Will Clark give in to Lois' determined pushing, or will Lois give up on Clark and pursue Trask on her own on get into trouble (Lois? nah, she'd never do that)
Tank (who wonders where Lucy will be sent next time)
Re: FDK: Waking a Miracle (11/??) - 09/18/04 01:26 PM
Diane, I've had very little time for reading posted stories lately, but I'm all caught up with yours now and am eagerly waiting for the next installment. Monday, right?
I love how you're taking familiar elements from the early episodes and, just by a little tweaking, are twisting everything into a new and enthralling storyline.
I particularly like your writing of Lois here. She's as determined and aggressive as ever, yet there's a softness here that we were rarely allowed to see in watching Season 1. I'm enjoying her thought processes as she has already seen through Luthor's veneer (yay!) and isn't constantly denying her attraction to Clark. Very very nice.
Kathy
I love how you're taking familiar elements from the early episodes and, just by a little tweaking, are twisting everything into a new and enthralling storyline.
I particularly like your writing of Lois here. She's as determined and aggressive as ever, yet there's a softness here that we were rarely allowed to see in watching Season 1. I'm enjoying her thought processes as she has already seen through Luthor's veneer (yay!) and isn't constantly denying her attraction to Clark. Very very nice.
Kathy
Re: FDK: Waking a Miracle (11/??) - 09/18/04 09:12 PM
Diane
Another excellent part!
Tricia
Another excellent part!
Tricia
Re: FDK: Waking a Miracle (11/??) - 09/20/04 08:36 PM
Hi,
Great part.
Great part.