FDK: Damaged-Part 23 - 09/13/04 12:43 PM
Hi,
Great part.
Great part.
Re: FDK: Damaged-Part 23 - 09/13/04 01:49 PM
Yet another fantastic part, Yvonne! 
Post more soon!
See ya,
AnnaBtG.
Post more soon!
See ya,
AnnaBtG.
Re: FDK: Damaged-Part 23 - 09/13/04 03:53 PM
Nice Yvonne. I am not sure why Lois would want to play dumb in front of Lana, but I like how they are working together and helping each other. Laura
Re: FDK: Damaged-Part 23 - 09/13/04 05:55 PM
Seems Lois has forgotten about her 'problem' with Clark and his 'obsession' with her. Her desire to keep their relationship at just the friendship level isn't going to be helped by her sexual teasing like at the end there.
tsk, tsk, Lois get a hold of yourself. Clark is a drug addled loser. You would be much happier with a loser who never took any drugs. Minnesota is quite nice in the fall.
Tank (who does have to add that Lois had better hurry since fall doesn't last too long in Minnesota either)
tsk, tsk, Lois get a hold of yourself. Clark is a drug addled loser. You would be much happier with a loser who never took any drugs. Minnesota is quite nice in the fall.
Tank (who does have to add that Lois had better hurry since fall doesn't last too long in Minnesota either)
Re: FDK: Damaged-Part 23 - 09/13/04 06:28 PM
Yes, and Tank? Last year when I drove across the country, one of my girlfriends MADE ME stop at the Mall of America! Now if that doesn't attract a woman to move out there, I don't know what does LOL
Re: FDK: Damaged-Part 23 - 09/13/04 09:17 PM
Yvonne, this was great, again. I like how they're melding into a nice relationship, work or not.
It's neat how she wanted to go with him, and how he cared enough to go tell Lana, however I think they're in for it when Lana tells her husband about their visit, which she surely will.
Nice way you talked about the price of their furnishings, very well snuck in there. (snuck? sneak, sneaked, snuck? grin) And about Lois being dumb, it was a good way to show she wasn't the same Lois as the other one, but it was good to let her be herself at the end and just let Lana have the facts.
Lana is such a b****. Totally a mean and rotten person. I should remember how you showed that when I'm trying to portray a character as rotten!
Again, as always, I'll have to count the days till the next segment appears. Are they all written or are you just keeping ahead of us by the skin of your teeth...seat of your pants?
until later...Nancy
It's neat how she wanted to go with him, and how he cared enough to go tell Lana, however I think they're in for it when Lana tells her husband about their visit, which she surely will.
Nice way you talked about the price of their furnishings, very well snuck in there. (snuck? sneak, sneaked, snuck? grin) And about Lois being dumb, it was a good way to show she wasn't the same Lois as the other one, but it was good to let her be herself at the end and just let Lana have the facts.
Lana is such a b****. Totally a mean and rotten person. I should remember how you showed that when I'm trying to portray a character as rotten!
Again, as always, I'll have to count the days till the next segment appears. Are they all written or are you just keeping ahead of us by the skin of your teeth...seat of your pants?
until later...Nancy
Re: FDK: Damaged-Part 23 - 09/14/04 10:26 AM
Great part 
More soon!
More soon!
Re: FDK: Damaged-Part 23 - 09/15/04 06:06 AM
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I am not sure why Lois would want to play dumb in front of Lana, but I like how they are working together and helping each other.
Tank, she's just getting on with living for a while without dwelling on those problems and issues. At least, that's my story and I'm sticking to it.
Yvonne