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Posted By: ChiefPam FDK: Twins, part 15 - 09/06/04 05:31 PM
Oh, Nan, this is fabulous! Poor cloned brother, trying to please the un-pleasable. I'm really glad Lois & Clark got through to him, and no one had to fight.

I really hope Dr. Klein can save him. And that Martha and Jonathan won't mind raising a full-grown son goofy

And at this rate, we're going to have to give him a name of his own wink

PJ
Posted By: Wendymr Re: FDK: Twins, part 15 - 09/06/04 05:39 PM
Really, really great scenes with the clone - and ditto Pam!

(We're doing this a little too often lately, don't you think? goofy )

Keep this coming - looking forward to part 16!


Wendy smile
Posted By: Supes1fan Re: FDK: Twins, part 15 - 09/06/04 06:03 PM
Nice job..can't wait to read what happens..can you really have the clone live?

Looking forward to more!

~Liz
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: FDK: Twins, part 15 - 09/06/04 06:24 PM
Hi,

Great part. help Jimmy need a new car. thumbsup


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All at once, the fight seemed to drain out of the clone and Lois saw that tears were leaking from his eyes. Superman was suddenly beside them, and Lois found herself with his solid body between her and the clone. As she watched, her partner put his arm around the other Superman's shoulder.

"It's all right," he said. "You're not alone, and you don't have to be afraid anymore."

The clone wiped at his face with the back of his hand and sniffled, looking more like a little boy than ever, Lois thought. She reached past Superman and patted him on the arm. "Don't cry," she said, somewhat uncomfortably, at least to her own ears. "It's going to be all right."
Love it. thumbsup

More ASAP, please.

MAF hyper
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK: Twins, part 15 - 09/06/04 09:50 PM
Aw poor baby Superman Clone. I feel sorry for him. I hope they can save him. Laura
Posted By: Shadow Re: FDK: Twins, part 15 - 09/06/04 10:49 PM
My one coherent thought after midnight...what would you do with the clone if you saved him? That's what I plan on pondering as I drift off into dreamland...

JD
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Looking forward to part 16!
Posted By: daneel Re: FDK: Twins, part 15 - 09/06/04 11:51 PM
Yay! smile1

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Posted By: LaurieD Re: FDK: Twins, part 15 - 09/07/04 09:55 AM
A touching and realistic turnaround for the clone. Sensitively done, Nan. Bravo.
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Posted By: Tank Re: FDK: Twins, part 15 - 09/07/04 02:27 PM
Yes, what do you do with the clone if you save him?

You might be able to ship him off 'across the pond' to start his own career, but his existence would prove to be problematic to the 'real' Superman. He can't exactly call him a clone, because that would set a bad precedent with the Industrial/Military Complex types. We'd have Super Clones coming out of our ears.

More... okay?

Tank (who is kicking himself for not getting one of the tin whistles that Andrea Corr threw into the audience at the concert... saliva has all the DNA needed, doesn't it?)
Posted By: Mister Data Re: FDK: Twins, part 15 - 09/08/04 03:05 PM
Finally caught up.

Sigh...The last three parts were great.

I wondered if you would save the clone.

It would definitely make it easier if Clark and Clone could make a few 'appearances' together.

James
Posted By: TriciaW Re: FDK: Twins, part 15 - 09/11/04 04:54 PM
Nan

This is fantastic. smile1 I also want to know what will happen to the clone if he lives.

Tricia cool
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