Hi,

Beautiful story.

Thank you

Hi there

MDL. (Who is actually thinking about funding the MLTVWA - Micro-Little-Tiny-Vignette Writers Association... You can join and get a button!)

To MDL
Thanks for the tip i've changed the icon i thought about posting for a beta reader but rather just post it here a figure it might not be good grammer but it's readabe (Just) but if anyone who reads it wants to i'll greatful. :p

Very sweet!!

~Julia

No problem...

Just keep writing!!! I´m gone now to read best christmas gift... bye!

MDL

Hi RSF

First, welcome to the boards. And congratulations on writing and posting fic!

But I'd like to echo the advice Anna and Erica (MDL) gave you to have your stories BRed before posting. I see that you know you need help with spelling and grammar - the problem is that readers on these boards are pretty much used to reading stories which have already been edited to remove most of the spelling and grammar errors. So they may be less patient than on other websites where stories contain a lot of mistakes.

If you have problems with spelling, do use your computer's spellchecker or a dictionary - there are several online dictionaries, such as www.dictionary.com. For grammar, the Fanfic Archive has a very helpful grammar guide ; it's not comprehensive, but it's a good start. Another favourite site of mine is Charles Darling\'s Guide to Grammar and Writing . Try these as well as getting a BR - believe me, you'll find that your writing will really improve.

Good luck!


Wendy

Cute!

Jose