:You've left yourself open for a sequel and Henderson becomes the Black Knight. What a triumverate Metropolis has now.
Have a great trip and hurry home. You have lots more writing to do.
Gerry
Nice ending!! I'm thrilled about the possiblities for sequels!!
Loved it Nan!
~Liz
I'm so sad this story is over... but it was a very fun ride
Have a great trip to Hawaii and then come back to keep cranking out the great fic!
PJ
This was a fun ride! For my tastes, it ended a little abruptly, but that, as others pointed out, happily leaves an opening for sequels.
Thanks again for the story.
Interesting little ride.
We all know that Nan is incapable of writing a story without at least two or three sequels to it.
Some interesting things yet to see. The Henderson, Sue dynamic is fun, but does allow for some nice wham potential.
I also think that the relationships between Lois, Clark, and Bill, are at the moment, too matter of fact, and formal. There's room for some more complicated involvement there also.
So, I guess we just have to wait for part 2 (and 3, and 4, and 5, and...)
Tank (who wonders if there is a name for a disease where a person feels compelled to write series)
Very cool!!! I love the Henderson in Tights.. and I love the way that he interacts with his wife and I want to see more of this particular universe
Anytime that you feel inspired of course
Nan, I sure hope you're planning a sequel! There's so much more I want to see - Lois and Clark actually dealing with the fact that Bill knows who Superman and UltraWoman are; the three Superheroes getting to know each other better; Bill feeling guilty about keeping a pretty big secret from Sue - and so on.
I loved this premise right from the start. Henderson is one of my very favourite supporting characters, and I really hope that you do more with him and his powers. Hey, how about a spin-off series?
You and Yvonne could even collaborate and give us
George and Bill: the New Adventures of Supercop!
Wendy
As always, a superb job.
And I am looking forward to the Sue and Lois interaction.
James
Great story
I confess, I never really thought about Henderson as a character before. Since I read your story and rewatched the episodes in which he appears, though, I've become quite a fan
I'll be here to read, if you decide to write a sequel
Julia