Hi,

Great part.

Anna

A great part!

I love their meeting with Bobby. Their banter is extremely well-written and lots of fun.

I'm enjoying this immensely and look forward to reading the next part.

Tricia

Anna!

I'm so glad you posted. You already know what I think about it but still...

It's a supergreat part and I can't wait for next one.

The Bobby scene is priceless. I also like Lois and Clark teasing exchanges and how you have a grasp on this first season's Lois. It's also great to let us have glimpse of her softer side, makes her more human, I mean, it's good to see she's not ALL workdriven!

Keep writing,

Carole

Good part!!

Jose

Good instalment.

Your Bobby was a lot more disgusting than the one on the series. I'm surprised Lois didn't kill him for taking food under false pretenses.

This relationship is really starting to take off. I wonder what will happen to mess it up.

Tank (who thinks this fic is ready for some really nasty whams)

good part Anna
merry