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Posted By: Lara Joelle Kent FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 01:47 PM
Nice little story. It's really just like Lois to go to the premiere just to gloat, not to mention exchange sweet little insults with Linda. laugh
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He shook his head and turned around again to face her. "That movie was a work of fiction, Lois. I never saved Linda from the Omiri ambassador and I certainly never kissed her."
clap That lipstick of Linda's sure has super powers of its own. sloppy

Hmm. Sequel?
Posted By: Marcus Rowland Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 02:07 PM
Sort of guessed that was coming (or red K in the mix), but it worked pretty well. Nice one!
Posted By: MrsLuthor Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 02:10 PM
Awww! Super sweet! Linda must wear that outlast lipstain. I swear, it's like a tattoo on your face. lol
Posted By: robinson Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 02:30 PM
What a nice surprise to go to the site and see a Sue story! I loved it. What a perfect ending and a surprise. I had forgotten about the lipstick. Fun, cute, waffy. Thanks.

Kathy
www.chili-everyway.com
Posted By: elizabeth Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 02:46 PM
Awesome, loved it! It wasn't until Superman put in an appearance that I remembered the lipstick. Nice touch and a sweet revelation story!

Was delighted to see another Sue S story on the boards!
Posted By: bobbart Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 04:11 PM
Sue, this was wonderful You achieved a near-perfect blend of story and WAFF for a short. smile1

Bob
Posted By: ChiefPam Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 05:52 PM
Love it, Sue! I remembered the lipstick as soon as he changed suits, but then it was fun to watch to see when she caught on. I think it was the eye-widening part... Perfect tagline -- explains everything *and* Lois gets the last word.

Thanks for posting!

PJ
Posted By: elizabeth Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 07:13 PM
I've now read this several times - it's that good! - and still I break into a smile on that last line!

I'm in two minds, however, as to when the penny dropped for Lois and she realised Superman was actually Clark; was it when she narrowed her eyes, or was it when her mouth went slack and she traced her fingers over his cheek? What do other readers think?

Cheers
Elizabeth
Posted By: LolaDane Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 07:20 PM
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Posted By: bobbart Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 07:33 PM
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I'm in two minds, however, as to when the penny dropped for Lois and she realised Superman was actually Clark; was it when she narrowed her eyes, or was it when her mouth went slack and she traced her fingers over his cheek? What do other readers think?
I never had a doubt. I could be wrong, but I was sure that it was right here.
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...she blinked and her mouth went slack. Her hand rose to touch his face, her eyes leaving his to track the movement of her fingers across his cheek.
Bob
Posted By: IolantheAlias Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 08:01 PM
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"You're there to make me look good, Clark. Get a tux."
Classic Lois! And a great story.
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 08:31 PM
I just love when I see a Sue story. I just always know it is going to make my night. And it has! Loved it! Knew I would too. Very cute ending. Laura
Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 09:12 PM
Sue, another winner! thumbsup Try to fly your way out of that one, Clark! Lots of fun!
Posted By: Tank Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/22/12 09:27 PM
Cute.

Tank (who has to admit that he had forgotten all about the lipstick smudge and was surprised by the revelation...clever Lois)
Posted By: Seme Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/23/12 03:56 AM
enjoyed this story, wish if there was a continuation
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/23/12 05:49 AM
Sue this was just great! A fun, smart and sexy way to start off the day.

A sweet WAFFY story, great revelation and Linda King FINALLY gets her comeuppance!

Personally I think it was when Lois narrowed her eyes!
Posted By: Female Hawk Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/23/12 06:51 AM
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Wonderful!

Thanks for sharing.

Corrina.
Posted By: Sue S. Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/23/12 08:30 AM
OMG! help
Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/23/12 10:16 AM
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ETA: Does anyone have a suggestion for the movie's title? I never could come up with one, which is they never mention it by name.
How about "Deadline"?
Posted By: KenJ Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/23/12 01:09 PM
Sue,

I read this on my BBerry and didn't trust it to create the FDK for you and by the time I was on my computer Lara had already done so. blush

Wonderful story. smile1

I must say, I had forgotten all about the lipstick, as aparently Clark had. clap

The way she trapped him into a reveal was marvelous. dance

Well done. laugh
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/23/12 01:14 PM
Oh, look see! There’s already a bunch of FDK in here. Should I even try to leave something… clap

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"I thought I was there so you could gloat."
Your point being?

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"You can't multi-task?" Her smile returned and she gave his shoulder a playful punch.
clap /hopes Clark does not repeat jokes he heard while at the Metropolis Men's Club.

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"Just a second," Lois shouted from inside, her words punctuated by short little clip-clops as she ran closer to the door in high heels.
So, just like Lucky Leon?

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In an instant, all the air seemed to leave his lungs.
And she just made her hair.

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The iridescent beading across the bodice seemed a valid excuse for his attention to linger a little longer there.
Down Clark! This is evening wear!

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Tonight her hair was styled as a riot of curls that perfectly illustrated the sexy, uncontrolled vibe that Lois projected.
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"It won't matter," Clark assured her. "Every man there is going to be looking at you."
[…]
As it turned out, Linda was wearing a bright red dress with a neckline that plunged so deeply as to almost reveal her bellybutton.
rotflol

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"Would you look at that?" Lois muttered. "She never disappoints."
What? She still needs somebody to pick up her hotel bill later that night.

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"Linda!" Lois chirped brightly. "That dress suits you. I haven't seen anything like it since I did that story on drag queens."
And here I expected her mention the date-experience callgirl ring.

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Linda's answering smile was just as fake. "Oh hello, Lois. I didn't see you at first. That color always washes you out, don't you think?"
“Maybe. But Clark doesn’t”

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"It's your night to shine -- or whatever
‘flash’?

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Lois glared at him as Linda walked away. "You should wipe that lipstick off your face before it leaves a scorch mark."
Huh. Kryptonite?

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"It's not like I asked her to kiss me," he said defensively.
His point being?

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"That is never coming off, Clark. I hope you're happy."
Oh boy. Hope he remembers when he has to fly off as Superman. There’ve been too many embarrassing incidents of late.

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The movie was terrible.
OOooh! So, you skipped the movie. Good. That means I still have time? If I can track down Muse and explain to her that gallivanting around with all things binary is not the proper form…

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Lois was out of her seat and headed for the exit before the lights came up. She moved past Linda, who was sitting with a frozen smile on her face, without saying a word.
Huh.

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Clark was utterly baffled by Lois' behavior.
/raises hand, too/

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. Her moment of triumph had arrived and she seemed determined to miss it. Instead of gloating at the after-party, she was headed for home.
Did Lois actually turn up in the movie?

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He brought up the fact that they had only been mentioned in passing.
Is she angry she *didn’t* turn up?
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/23/12 01:16 PM
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Their roles in uncovering Carpenter's machinations had been left out of the movie entirely. Lois only shrugged.
confused

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That was pure fiction, just like the kiss between the painfully wooden actors playing Linda and Superman.
Uh-oh.

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He was almost insulted, but the situation was so far from any kind of reality that he very much doubted anyone could believe it had actually happened.
Superman would never kiss a reporter in front of the assembled press. Or a megalomaniac billionaire.

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Clark was about to ask if that scene was what was bothering her but something in her posture made him hesitate.
‘Mad Lois with a piece of Kryptonite’?

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"Not really. I have a massive headache all of a sudden. Good night, Clark."
Huh.

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There was the faint sound of her refrigerator door opening.
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"Don't do this to yourself," Lois whispered. She let out a sigh. "She made it up. She's the biggest, fattest, trashiest liar in the world." The refrigerator door slammed closed. "And he kissed her."
wave Michael

PS: Sorry, if that's too long an FDK blush /marvels at birth of latest oximoron/
Posted By: jackiek Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/23/12 02:39 PM
Always happy to see something from you. Loved it as usual. Great job and wonderful ending.
Posted By: Joy Moony Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/23/12 05:33 PM
nice job. I love it
Posted By: caincrazy Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/23/12 10:34 PM
Ok I am going to admit that I am an idiot. I read this story late last night (obviously i should have been sleeping). When it got to the last line, I thought, I don't get it, what am I missing ?. It was a good story, don't get me wrong, I was just missing the punch line. Today I read the fdk and realize, I had totally forgotten about the lipstick. Shows you what lack of sleep does. So I have gone back and re read the story. It makes so much more sense now.

Thanks for sharing, looking forward to the sequel.
Posted By: elizabeth Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/24/12 05:11 AM
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I won't answer your question, though, because there is a companion story to this one from Lois' POV in the very near future.
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A companion story, ooh I'm liking this more and more! Can't wait for the companion piece to be posted!

hyper

Cheers
Elizabeth
Posted By: Jen P Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/24/12 08:06 AM
I loved this story! And I have admit that I forgot about the lipstick as well. :-) I can't wait for the companion piece!
Posted By: Vicki Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/24/12 09:37 AM
smile1 I do LOVE Sue S. stories!

I really liked this story. I had forgotten all about the lipstick. It was fun to go back and re-read. It's a different story altogether the second time around.

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Her eyes narrowed and he wondered if he was being indicted for a crime he hadn't committed.
The first time around, I took this at face value. I thought the crime was kissing Linda, and Superman had been unjustly accused. The second time around, I read it differently. Clark is guilty as charged.

I wasn't quite sure when she figured it out, though. Part of me even suspected that she knew all along, because she seemed almost curt with Clark on the way back from the theater. But I suppose it's more probable that she realized when she scrutinized him upon his arrival and saw the lipstick.

As I read it the second time around, I was thinking to myself that I'd give anything to be able to get inside Lois's head. I am SO happy to see you will be letting us do just that. I've very much looking forward to seeing the story from Lois's POV. Please don't keep me waiting TOO long!
Posted By: Sue S. Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/25/12 08:24 AM
Oh my goodness! I was tied up all day yesterday in meetings and it was killing me that I couldn't come check the site compulsively. And now look! New FDK! Yet again I have been spared the lesson about not getting my hopes up. :p

Virginia - Deadline - I like it! I'll credit you appropriately - thanks!

Ken - No worries! I don't trust my smart phone to do lots of things. I've tried pulling up the site on it, but once I expand it enough to be able to read it's a huge pain to try and navigate around. I'm not sure I'd dare trying to create a post. smile I'm glad you liked the story and delighted to hear that you'd forgotten about the lipstick. I think stories are a lot more fun when they surprise you.

Michael - Holy hell!!! sloppy

Jackie - Hopefully you know by now that I'm always happy to see something from you, too!

Joy - Thank you!

Caincrazy - lol I've done that before myself - read a story and gone 'huh?' at the end because I was on auto-pilot. I'm glad you gave it a second read. laugh

Elizabeth - I'm still polishing the other story. I wasn't able to do much Monday night or yesterday, but this afternoon is looking good for me. smile

Jen - Thanks! I'm glad you forgot about the lipstick and that you liked the story.

Vicki - There you are! Don't think your absence went unnoticed. I figured you were caught up in RL stuff and I never know whether to shoot off an email or not.
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Her eyes narrowed and he wondered if he was being indicted for a crime he hadn't committed.
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The first time around, I took this at face value. I thought the crime was kissing Linda, and Superman had been unjustly accused. The second time around, I read it differently. Clark is guilty as charged.
That is exactly what I was going for!
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I wasn't quite sure when she figured it out, though. Part of me even suspected that she knew all along, because she seemed almost curt with Clark on the way back from the theater. <snip> As I read it the second time around, I was thinking to myself that I'd give anything to be able to get inside Lois's head.
Her curtness will be explained. And you'll get to see the movie, the ride home and then the aftermath from Lois' perspective.

Thanks to everyone whose posted comments. If you knew just how much that meant to me, you might think I was pathetic. I'm kidding. You'd definitely think I was pathetic. blush
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/25/12 01:53 PM
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Holy hell!!! [Thud]
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I don't even know where to start in answering your FDK! (That is most definitely NOT a complaint.)
/wipes brow in relief/

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I think it's almost as long as the story itself.
Oopsie. It *was* five pages in Word...

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It's worth all the time invested in writing a story to be able to virtually watch over your shoulder as you read it.
hyper

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I don't remember who it was, but I do recall seeing someone on this site complain that Lois was wildly out of character in 'The Rival'.
Yeah. I do like the more rough-around-the-corners Lois, too. She gives Clark so much more grief wave Michael
Posted By: EmilyC Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/25/12 07:05 PM
Sue! What a treat to click in here tonight and see this posted. A new Sue!fic. I was just thinking about you the other day and wondering if a poking email would be well received, and you anticipated me with a new story! Yay!

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"I was almost suffocated in a freezer! Is it asking so much for my best friend to gloat with me when my frenemy's vanity project blows up in her face?"
I love the set-up of this date. Nothing like watching Superman on the big screen unknowingly sitting beside the read deal. And I love that you used the term "frenemy"

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Tonight her hair was styled as a riot of curls that perfectly illustrated the sexy, uncontrolled vibe that Lois projected.
What a great description.

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"It won't matter," Clark assured her. "Every man there is going to be looking at you."

For a fleeting moment her cheeks flushed. Then Lois rolled her eyes at him. "Nice try, Kent. Let's go."
Awh, shucks. blush

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Maybe it had the same effect on her because she blinked and her mouth went slack. Her hand rose to touch his face, her eyes leaving his to track the movement of her fingers across his cheek.
Maybe, or perhaps she just discovered your deepest, darkest secret. Hee! Busted, Superman.

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She gave him a smile that was dazzling in its sincerity. "I'm not asking you to tell me the whole truth."
I love that she gets him to confess his love.

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Lois shivered, her body brushing lightly against his. "Thank you," she whispered and went on tiptoe to leave a light kiss on his jaw. Clark closed his eyes to memorize the sensation. "You know, if this were a movie, we'd make love tonight. One perfect, never-to-be-repeated night."
But since it's not a movie, you can make love tonight and have it be oft-repeated!

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"Lois, I--" he murmured but got no further when her finger touched his lips to silence him.

"Shh." Her fingers moved, caressing softly over his cheek. "I told you that lipstick was never going to come off."
Great last line; love the ending!

So nice to see something new from you, Sue.
Posted By: EmilyC Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/25/12 07:08 PM
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Originally posted by Sue S.:
Her curtness will be explained. And you'll get to see the movie, the ride home and then the aftermath from Lois' perspective.
I just saw this and I can't tell you how excited it makes me to hear that there is more. I so love getting both perspectives in a revelation. Woohoo!
Posted By: Artemis Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/25/12 08:01 PM
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Bwaaaahhhhhaaaa. That was great!!!!!!!
Yes, indeed. The lipstick never comes off.
cool
Artemis
Posted By: Sue S. Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/25/12 09:38 PM
Oooh! Look! More! clap dance

Michael - I shall endeavor to give you something worthy of commenting. <g>
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You're very welcome to include it in the archived version if you feel like it.
I just might, at that. laugh

Emily - Awww! A poking email from you is always well received. (Speaking of which - check your email.) I'm glad you liked the story so much! Especially since you picked out most of my favorite details to highlight. smile

Artemis - Yay! I'm glad I could entertain you! In this instance, it's a darn good thing the lipstick never came off. Lois might actually end up owing Linda a favor. wink

Thanks to everyone for recharging my batteries (as it were). You guys are the best! sloppy
Posted By: IolantheAlias Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/26/12 10:27 PM
OK.

/cracks whip/

Start posting on that Lois POV story, will you?

/cracks whip again/

What, you don't work well with whips? How about some frenzied pleading, followed by abject begging? laugh
Posted By: Morgana Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/27/12 03:30 PM
Absolutely! I'm with IolantheAlias! You have got to post Lois side of the story!
Posted By: Sue S. Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/27/12 04:42 PM
Nice! Whip cracking and pleading! laugh devil

This week ended up being a lot more frantic at work than I had expected and I wasn't able to do much in the evenings either. But it's done now and I've just sent it off to the betas. smile
Posted By: AmyPrime Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/27/12 08:48 PM
Count me among the surprised. What fun!
Posted By: mozartmaid Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/28/12 02:52 AM
I just can never pass up a Sue story -- and this one did not disappoint! I LOVED it! Had me laughing in some parts and enjoying the Waffs in others. But the kicker, oh my -- was the last line! Perfection!!
Posted By: Sydney Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/28/12 02:59 AM
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But the kicker, oh my -- was the last line! Perfection!!
I agree and, please, post Lois POV story.

Great story. Il loved it. hyper hyper hyper hyper
Posted By: angelsgmaw Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/28/12 04:18 AM
Too bad Clark couldn't put glasses on a lipstick stain! I'm sure that would have kept him for giving his secret away.

When we get right down to the bottom layer, Lois has always been upset about anyone kissing either Clark or Superman. That was her lip territory only. SO, now that she knows the secret and she is ready to become his "secret" girlfriend, the only secret left is that Lois is in love with him too. I think all the way around, all the secrets were disolved in one evening.

Loved this!
Pat
Posted By: Sue S. Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/28/12 02:57 PM
Hark! More feedback! I got a little misty-eyed when I came on this morning and saw that more people had dropped in to say 'hi'. wave

Amy - Glad I surprise you. smile

Mozart - Gah! I sat there wracking the few brain cells I have left because I know that I know your name. dance Let me put it this way, I came by for a snack and was treated with Thanksgiving dinner. sloppy
Posted By: Artemis Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/28/12 03:55 PM
I have even a better idea from the readers POV. You need a sequel on the nfic side. There is nothing in this world like Sue nfic! eek eek eek
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Artemis
Posted By: Sue S. Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/29/12 06:12 AM
Artemis - that's very sweet of you to say, but I don't think I can do an nfic on this one. That long story I'm trying to finish? It's an nfic and every spare dirty thought I have has to go towards that. smile
Posted By: Artemis Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 04/29/12 08:28 AM
Well, in that case, since it's for a worthy cause... laugh Looking forward to your nfic.
r/
Artemis
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 05/02/12 12:53 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! I loved this! So sweet and what a clever way for Lois to find out. Poor Clark didn't even realize the smooch was still there.

Off to read Lois' perspective!
Posted By: Sue S. Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 05/03/12 07:32 AM
Artemis - Oh, yes. A very worthy cause. wink

Mouse - Thanks! I'm glad you liked the story. I'm a little nervous, though, because I haven't heard anything from you about the follow-up. <eep!>

I'm starting to think I overstretched. About half the people who admitted to reading the first one haven't said a thing about the sequel. blush mecry It's hard to catch lightning in a bottle, but this story certainly seemed to. Thank you!
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 05/08/12 07:48 PM
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The tone of her voice was just a shade too breezily casual to be a simple question.
I could *so* hear her voice too. laugh

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In truth, he would have happily painted her entire apartment just to be able to spend that much time with her, but he didn't want her to know he was that big of a pushover.
Psst! Clark! She already knows that. wink

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"Done?" Lois looked like that question had stung her. "I don't need anything done. Can't I ask you to hang out with me without it being an imposition?"
Ummm...yeah, Lois, when you ask in *that* tone you want something.

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"How would you like to go see a movie with me?"
Date? hyper

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He couldn't stop himself from making a face as he repeated, "Movie?"
Or not.

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"That movie. In fact, it's the premiere. They sent me free tickets and arranged for a limo and everything. I wasn't going to go until I heard that Linda isn't playing me after all. Apparently she barely got a speaking role. I guess she's one of the people in the elevator that Superman rescued. The thought of her humiliation is just too tempting to pass up. God, I hope she squirms"
SO like her to go just to gloat! laugh

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If the advance reviews were accurate, bad acting, terrible special effects and the insertion of a terrorist subplot involving the ambassador from Omir overshadowed any intrigue the movie might have had.
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"You should wipe that lipstick off your face before it leaves a scorch mark."
Oooh! I quite like this!

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"You should wipe that lipstick off your face before it leaves a scorch mark."
OMG! She went to the bathroom during the movie and was replaced by a clone! eek

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It was only after he had rapped lightly on her window that common sense kicked in and told him that this might be a bad idea.
<grin>

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Her eyes narrowed and he wondered if he was being indicted for a crime he hadn't committed.
Ooooh!

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For a split second Clark panicked as he realized he had just given specifics about a movie he supposedly hadn't seen.
I was about to say...

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Lois had thrown herself at Superman on more than one occasion but apparently the irony was lost on her.
Yeah, but that's okay by her since it's *her*. <grin>

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Lois stood up straighter. "What is your type?" she asked quietly.

Clark hesitated. There was a very clear line here and he was just as clearly about to cross it. "I think you already know."
Danger! Danger!

<sirens start to go Whoop! Whoop!>

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Clark took a step closer to her, close enough now that they were almost touching. "If Superman could have a girlfriend, it would be you."
Danger! Danger!

<sirens start to go Whoop! Whoop!>

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"Maybe you already are."
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Their new proximity had him breathlessly aware of her and that form-fitting dress.
And that the suit hides *nothing*.

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Clark realized that if he touched her again now he wouldn't stop. Not ever.
<checks board heading>

Darn. G-fic.

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She'd push him backwards out the window if she knew the truth.
Ha!

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"Do you love me?"
eek

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Clark took a deep breath, steadying himself against the weight of the words he was about to say. He looked into her eyes, willing her to understand these were the truest words he'd ever tell her. "I love you."
<jaw hangs slack>

But...but...Oh Clark, you're screwing this up for your normal self, aren't you?

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"And there's that whole truth I'd have to tell you first." It suddenly felt very important that she know the truth -- the whole truth.
Oooh!

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Her eyes widened and she swallowed hard. "What if I already know the whole truth?"
Ooooh!

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"Shh." Her fingers moved, caressing softly over his cheek. "I told you that lipstick was never going to come off."
<Claps>

Awesome! Oh Lois, you're evil for toying with Clark. But, I *so* approve of it!

<runs off to read the other segment of this>
Posted By: Sue S. Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 05/09/12 07:44 AM
DC - Wow! Thank you for the long and lovely FDK! dance I feel slightly guilty now, though, because it's been a couple of weeks since I've been able to read Contractually. Stupid RL.
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I could *so* hear her voice too.
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*Nailed* her voice!
Thanks! To me there is no higher compliment than to hear that the characterization rang true for someone else. You've made my day!
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<checks board heading>

Darn. G-fic.
blush Yeah… Originally I had him noticing a lot more about her, but I figured I'd better tone it down.
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But...but...Oh Clark, you're screwing this up for your normal self, aren't you?
Oh, absolutely he is. I tried really hard to shade it so that it felt like he no longer had much (if any) choice about it.
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Oh Lois, you're evil for toying with Clark. But, I *so* approve of it!
He's earned it. evil

Thanks for bringing this one back! laugh
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 05/09/12 10:49 AM
Hi Sue! wave

No worries. I actually wanted to get to this story much earlier on, but between RL and finishing Contractually Bound, I just never got the time. So...we're even. laugh
Posted By: IolantheAlias Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 05/09/12 09:07 PM
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<checks board heading>

Darn. G-fic.
Yeah… Originally I had him noticing a lot more about her, but I figured I'd better tone it down.
Don't you think this calls out for an expansion of the story on the nfic boards? I certainly do! (hint, hint!)
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 05/09/12 11:00 PM
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Originally posted by IolantheAlias:
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<checks board heading>

Darn. G-fic.
Yeah… Originally I had him noticing a lot more about her, but I figured I'd better tone it down.
Don't you think this calls out for an expansion of the story on the nfic boards? I certainly do! (hint, hint!)
I second that motion!!! laugh
Posted By: Sue S. Re: FDK: The Whole Truth - 05/11/12 04:31 PM
Oh my heck! Two pages! wave

Thanks to everyone for two pages. I can scarcely contain my joy! sloppy
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