FDK: The Vampire Murders: 5/? - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

/tacks FDK thread on board/

Michael

WOW!! continues as creepy, and a smugglers cove to boot.

TEEEEEEJ

Well, now we know where the vampire came from, and why it hit those two Costmart employees. But where is it now? And when will it attack Lois?

The suspense is killing me!

Tara

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If we walk right into Dracula, I won't even be surprised at this point.

What about if you find him hanging around outside your windows? I bet that might surprise her. <g>

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Something about' the sleeping one.' or something.

It’s at this point that my brain screamed, “Dun, dun, DUUNNNNN!” Oh, holy crap, is that what’s hanging around outside Lois’ window?!? <shudders>

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"I guess the creep factor is making my imagination go a little nuts."

Mine, too, Lois. Mine, too. I’m freaking out at the thought that someone was locked up in that (now empty!) box to die and now they’re back for revenge…

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"You know, I wondered if it might be smuggling," Lois said. "What could they be bringing in?"

"Could be anything," Clark said, "but whatever was in those boxes was heavy."

"Weapons? Drugs?"

"We're going to have to find out," Clark said.

Oh, come on, Clark! You had to have peeked to see what was in them! Just make an “educated” guess for us!

<sigh> So… how long do we have to wait for part 6?

Native American vampires? An empty coffin? Wake the Sleeping One?

Creep factor at 100% now. Not the funnest thing to find in an abandoned crypt.

Of course, Lois would want to go back down the tunnel all the "smuggles" goods came from. They're lucky they didn't find anyone at the other end. So, now they're walking around smuggler's cove and Lois wants to check the address? Yeah, let's go to the front of that building, Lois, there couldn't possibly be any way to get in trouble THERE.

Hmmm... is whatever was in the box really a vampire? Or is this just an elaborate distraction?

And why would it be attracted to Lois? Oh, dumb question. She has a karmic magnet for trouble.

LOL!

I guess you'll just have to keep reading and find out. <g>

Nan

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"I just hope there's another way out of here," Clark said. "I kind of doubt it, though, or things would likely have been disturbed.

Hmm, since there didn’t appear to be an entrance anywhere, where *was* the entrance?

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"This one. And I'm creeped out, believe me. If we walk right into Dracula, I won't even be surprised at this point."

Michael

Creepy but excellent. More soon please; the suspense is terrible!

Amber