Love the set up. Can't wait to find out why Clark's behaving so oddly.

Joan

I'm intrigued. Clark acting so strange around Mayson and Lois. What is going on with Wells? I can't wait to see what's happening.

"What?" I exclaimed in horror at Clark's revelation. Then I read the next line:
Great minds think alike.

Good chapter(s)! Curious about what has Clark acting so strangely, and obviously he still cares for Lois... what could Mayson possibly offer(threaten?) that is keeping him away? And when is Wells returning? Can't wait for more!

Whew!!! You are weaving quite a mystery here. Can't wait to see where you take us, what is fueling Clark's actions. Wow! More, please, please, please.

Hmm, ever more puzzling. I can't figure out what has Clark so messed up. His choice of words really made me stop and think. He said "I've said that I'll hand in my resignation." As if he had been forced to promise that. I believe that he doesn't want to hurt Lois...so why is he?

And did Wells just disappear after Lois told him Clark left? I might have to go back and look.

So...marriage counseling. Sinister undertones or not, I think this might turn out good. Of course, anything away from Mayson is good.

Looking forward to the rest!

Definitely quite a mystery! I also cannot work out why Clark is behaving so strangely ... And where has HG Wells disappeared off to?

Can't wait to find out where you're going with this!

Ah, I hope you'll like this. And I agree concerning Mayson.

Thanks for you feedback!