FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (17/??) - 09/03/11 01:47 AM
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (17/??) - 09/03/11 03:27 PM
Woderful, nothing like a little competition to change someones mind. 
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (17/??) - 09/04/11 01:04 AM
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“Although you’re as much to blame as I am.”
“Me?” He had no idea what she was talking about.
Her eyes went into slits and she spat out the name, “Kal.”
“Oh.” Clark’s brow furrowed. “What did he do?”
“Me?” He had no idea what she was talking about.
Her eyes went into slits and she spat out the name, “Kal.”
“Oh.” Clark’s brow furrowed. “What did he do?”
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Clark released a held breath and went to kiss Lois’s cheek. She turned her head at the last moment and made the kiss on the mouth. Clark smiled gleefully at the change and then waved at them as he jogged off to the parking garage.
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“I heard you break up with Clark. You were quite loud,” the blonde replied.
Lois 2, Mayson 1. Damn, back in the game.
Lois raised a brow.
“And I noticed that Clark didn’t know if the two of you were still together, hence his pause while introducing you. So don’t you go on pretending he isn’t up for the grabbing should I want him.”
Double damn! Lois 2, Mayson 2.
Lois 2, Mayson 1. Damn, back in the game.
Lois raised a brow.
“And I noticed that Clark didn’t know if the two of you were still together, hence his pause while introducing you. So don’t you go on pretending he isn’t up for the grabbing should I want him.”
Double damn! Lois 2, Mayson 2.
Lois needs to gain some ground, and fast. Mayson's wedging her way in there. Also, did I miss the break up scene she's referring to? When was this? Confused... 
, as always, and looking forward to more coming soon! Went a little overboard with the commenting, but oh well. I was interested. And couldn't stand another minute spending time with my family today (I'm going 
crazy here and if I'm not careful, someone(likely me) is going to end up looking like this: 
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Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (17/??) - 09/04/11 11:36 AM
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He stared at Lois as she stormed off and slammed her apartment door.
Michael
Edit: I think, I might have gone overboard again...
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (17/??) - 09/06/11 07:28 PM
OK, since I stumped everyone on this one, the "break-up line" from Part 16: KenJ: Thank you. I always thought it would be fun if Lois had a shot down Mayson before she became a real threat. 
Mouserocks: Yes, Clark dense much. Sorry, I've made him so clueless. He'll eventually get a clue. Not everyone knows what Langosta is popular for. 
Again, sorry, L&C never seem to be on the same page at the same time. Mayson is JUST starting her job at justice. So, still a peon.
Did I mention that Lois was confused a bit on this day? She bounces one way and then back and back again. And well, Clark did say he wanted to spend the rest of his life proving he deserved her love. Sounds pretty proposing to some of us. Yep. Let's hope Clark doesn't run into Mayson... Or maybe he should. Here's to hoping you don't look like Bill the Cat!
Michael:I was going to end it originally with Clark hearing her blood curdling scream, after the door slamming, but then I thought maybe I should show what she saw when she went inside instead. Sorry, if I confused you. 
Lois does not live in S. Slum. Just not the best neighborhood. And, yes, Michael, no claws in my story.
Except Mayson has a fear of Capes.
As you well know, Clark never shops local.
Thank you again for the great comments. I'm glad I'm still entertaining you.
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Lois started to shake her head. “No. No. No. I can’t do this. I like you too much. I want you too much.” She stared him straight into his eyes. “That’s why I can never see you again.” She turned and ran into her apartment, slamming the door.
Mouserocks: Yes, Clark dense much.
Sorry, I've made him so clueless. He'll eventually get a clue. Not everyone knows what Langosta is popular for. Again, sorry, L&C never seem to be on the same page at the same time. Mayson is JUST starting her job at justice. So, still a peon.Quote
That's no "little white lie," Lois. That one landed you in hot water. People considering breaking up with their boyfriends typically don't go around announcing that they're engaged when they're not. I mean, that's just common sense.
Yep. Let's hope Clark doesn't run into Mayson... Or maybe he should. Here's to hoping you don't look like Bill the Cat!Michael:
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And *now* it clicked. The globe. And you just *can't* put such momentous stuff into the *last* line and hide it like that. People will miss it, given how one's all torn up inside over the end of the part. It works much better on TV, because there you see the mess, or the blood spatter when a bullet tear up the head of the hero. But in a multi-part post-format, with another major happening just in the previous paragraph, ugh-uh.
Lois does not live in S. Slum. Just not the best neighborhood. And, yes, Michael, no claws in my story.
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/starts picking out a condolence card for his parents/ Say, do they have one with a dead green alien?
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*G* And back to Gotham with you. I've heard Bruce is still looking for his blonde of the week.
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Please tell me he heard that. Or is Mayson going to congratulate him and when he looks stupefied, she tries to snag him.
Thank you again for the great comments. I'm glad I'm still entertaining you.
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (17/??) - 09/08/11 01:31 PM
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For mind protection?
Michael
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (17/??) - 09/08/11 05:18 PM
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Originally posted by Darth Michael:
I thought that was tights 
So Batmen shouldn't be an issue, depending on the version, i.e. so long as it's not the Adam West version.
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Except Mayson has a fear of Capes.
So Batmen shouldn't be an issue, depending on the version, i.e. so long as it's not the Adam West version.
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (17/??) - 09/09/11 10:01 AM
Probably. But it's still tights for him.
![[Linked Image]](http://herodistrict.com/wp-content/uploads/2011/07/1aa85050-a3a5-45b9-bf3e-8840265bf0ed_batman_Adam_West.jpg)
But he's still the scary Batmen
Michael
But he's still the scary Batmen
Michael
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (17/??) - 08/04/14 08:48 PM
Hello there!
I'm back even when I haven't posted my final FDK at Missing Lois (because I finish my reading in the cellphone), I couldn't stop myself to start reading this story.... so, a quick comment: this story has been so easy to read! Really love Lois' naughty inner mind, the way it keeps annoying her ![[Linked Image]](http://www.runemasterstudios.com/graemlins/images/laughing.gif)
and Clark's mind keeps being a total lunckhead ![[Linked Image]](http://www.runemasterstudios.com/graemlins/images/grumble.gif)
I really want to write much more, but I have a little 6 years old girl hovering in my right ear right now... you know, vacations and all... so, I hope I might be able to come back at night and leave a proper comment.
See you!
I'm back
even when I haven't posted my final FDK at Missing Lois (because I finish my reading in the cellphone), I couldn't stop myself to start reading this story.... so, a quick comment: this story has been so easy to read! Really love Lois' naughty inner mind, the way it keeps annoying her and Clark's mind keeps being a total lunckhead I really want to write much more, but I have a little 6 years old girl hovering in my right ear right now... you know, vacations and all... so, I hope I might be able to come back at night and leave a proper comment.
See you!
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (17/??) - 08/05/14 01:44 AM
chelo:
Welcome to my second longest story (or third, once I finish and archive Wrong Clark).
Thank you. I hope you enjoyed the last three chapters of Missing Lois. 
This story is much less angsty, much more of a comedy.
Yeah. Well. Lois's inner voice kind of stole the story out from under Lois and Clark.
Completely understand. Can't wait until September myself. 
Thank you for the comments.
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Hello there!
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I'm back even when I haven't posted my final FDK at Missing Lois (because I finish my reading in the cellphone), I couldn't stop myself to start reading this story.... so, a quick comment: this story has been so easy to read!
even when I haven't posted my final FDK at Missing Lois (because I finish my reading in the cellphone), I couldn't stop myself to start reading this story.... so, a quick comment: this story has been so easy to read! This story is much less angsty, much more of a comedy.Quote
Really love Lois' naughty inner mind, the way it keeps annoying her and Clark's mind keeps being a total lunckhead
and Clark's mind keeps being a total lunckhead Quote
I really want to write much more, but I have a little 6 years old girl hovering in my right ear right now... you know, vacations and all... so, I hope I might be able to come back at night and leave a proper comment.
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See you!
Thank you for the comments.