FDK: Chocolate Lab 9/9 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

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Loved it!!

Loved that dessert ended up being each other.

Great story!!!

I spent the last part of 9 awaiting Moose eating the tiramisu. After all, that is his trademark. We'd be disappointed if he didn't get it.

Nice story. Lois with anything other than a tank of fish stretches the imagination. So nice to meet Moose. But as usual, the best part is the romance between Lois & Clark.

Thanks.
Pat

MMM the ending was very tasty! Laura

I loved this story. The only sad part is that it is over.

Sarah

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Self-consciously, Clark did so. The sun felt nice. It wasn’t as strengthening as being ten thousand feet above Metropolis at noon. But it was nice.

LOL!

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Clark nodded obediently and went back around the bed. He laid down in the sunbeam. Lois sat on the bed and then stretched herself out next to him. They lay shoulder to shoulder. She took his hand but didn’t look at him.

Awwwwwwww!

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He figured that if he apologized two or three times daily, he could get a thousand apologies in within the next year.

Such a romantic! *sigh*

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Lois had begun running her finger up and down his chest and his brain had short-circuited.

LOL!

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“That dog ate your tiramisu again,” Clark said through clenched teeth. He was bitter. In view of the recent warming of relations between himself and Lois… well, he’d had plans for that dessert.

Poor Clark cannot catch a break!

LOVE the ending! Go Lois! Seduce Clark!

Love this story.

Aw...Moose got their dessert again!

Great ending!

Joan

Just caught up with 8 & 9 ...

Loved this story and it was just

Oh this story was amazing. Very well written and very witty. I had some serious laugh out loud moments in it. Plus Clark getting shot had some 'hurt/comfort' aspects. And not one revelations but TWO. (or 4, if you count Nigel and the other guy whose name I think is Jason but I'm too lazy to go look up :p )

Anyway, fantastic job and I really loved this!

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“You love me?” Clark asked incredulously, rolling on his side to face her.

Lois snuggled up to him. “Of course I do, you big lunkhead.”

Well, there've been hints. Like the lack of killing after the initial looks that might kill. And the lack of a shirt. And his horizontal state of being...

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“That dog ate your tiramisu again,”

Michael