Wow!

The part where Lois confronts Clark is impressive

And the cliffhanger!!

Jose

AAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

I just typed a really long response to this, Sara, telling you how much I loved it... but the boards ate it. :p ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Just take my word for it that I really, really love this and want more.


Wendy

Hi,

Great part.

I think you said it perfectly Wendy

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAASAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!
was exactly right. Laura

Sara!!!!!

Remember all the support I gave you before. Well, you can just forget it!!!!!

How could you do that?

Bring Clark back, make Lois tear out after him. Make them both run to each other. Do something!!!!!!

<g>

Barb.

Sara,
I'm playing catchup again
love this
but
I HATE CLIFFHANGERS
merry

Scandalous!

This is awesome, Sara! I love it! I especially liked the line about the duct-tape! Priceless!

I'm glad I got a chance to read this, and I'm hoping it will be a very long, hopefully eventful story, and I hope it is as steamy as this!

You have quite the talent to weave these characters together in the most unique of ways, and I hope you are planning on posting the next part in, say, two minutes? Does three work better for you?

Anyway, more please!

-Jo

Sara

I've just managed to catch up with this.
WOW, it's excellent.

You did an amazing job portraying Lois and Clark's emotions. Superbly written!
Yikes, Clark has to come back.

I can't wait to see where this is headed.

Tricia

Hey everybody

Thanks so much for commenting, guys! You really made my horrible, horrible day so much better

Hey, that's not fair!!!!! <g>

Okay, once again to you all...

Sara