I just read this the other day. What was different, I didn't catch it. Anyway I still love it and I am looking forward to the nfic epilogue as promised ;-)Laura

I added more background in the beginning and cut out some scenes to balance it out a bit. I'm glad you liked it. I've already posted the NFIC version in the NFIC folder. :p

This is the first time I've read this. It's good! I like the twist of Lois figuring out he's Superman by noticing him catching the bullets. That makes sense. Good story!

Joan

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it.