I'm just catching up on my long fiction I missed over the last year and this story is terrific.
It's a different view of the Wonder Woman that I recall from the old TV show and Superfriends, but as I've heard rumors about an old relationship (in comics) between her and the Man of Blue, I totally can believe your version of things. I love that this super powerful woman is only "wonder woman" because she out seeking a mate to help her conceive her daughter. Ironic! Love it!
Although, I know Clark has the greatest ability to forgive of any man I've ever seen (fiction or otherwise), I still can't see him forgiving Diana any time soon.
I was a little confused by one part (I think in the prologue*), maybe you addressed this in earlier comments, but didn't Lois think at some point that she had been pregnant or "conceived" when Diana accused her of being baren? Then you kind of left that tease hanging without explanation.
I love how Clark never once falters in his love and devotion to Lois. It was a beautiful thing to behold. Lois is one lucky woman.
I kept wondering (from your opening warning) if you were going to have Clark fight Diana at some point and then realized it was his letting lose of his anger after on Paradise Island and threatening the women after they had allowed this fight to go on. I didn't find anywhere near as bad as you led me to believe after that warning. (phew!)
I'm always amazed that when it comes to some things (like old ancient laws) that one has to follow that people are real sticklers. Why couldn't they have just put Lois on a plane and sent her home -- no harm, no foul. Especially since she had been kidnapped for this fight anyway. Nobody but Diana thought it fair that Lois should have to fight, but instead of doing what would be right -- they all said, 'well, since the battle has been announced'... <<shakes head>> This isn't a criticism of your writing / story / plot as I totally bought that -- just a comment on how they kind of deserved what they brought upon themselves (Superman's wrath) for going along with the fight when they knew in their hearts (and minds) that it was wrong.
I wondered if they were going to ask the healer for help conceiving, but I guess she gave it to Lois anyway.
Unlike Tank, I liked the Epilogue! I would have liked an extra scene with Lois telling Clark, but Bernie's distraction with his own love-life was
* Okay, I checked the Prologue and it wasn't there (unless the Archive version differed). Maybe I'm just imagining things.