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You're tugging at my heartstrings!

Please, please, please bring them back together soon!

Another excellent part. Eagerly awaiting part 6.

Joy,
Lynn

Great story! Yeah, please let Lois come home!

Fantastic writing! You've definitely got all our heartstrings tugged! I do hope Lois comes back to Metropolis soon---and before the AARGH! part of Season 3

... I like how you're refering to events in the episodes as a way to mark time... I just don't want a clone Lois to show up with no real Lois in sight! Please don't do that to us!!

Delightful tale. I like the way time is passing. I am looking forward to the arrival of Zara and Clark's interactions with the New Kryptonians.

I know, you mentioned the lack of intention for A-plot, but still, with every recounting of yet another Lois-situation, I kept worrying. African rebel armies can be dangerous

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You know she won the Merriweather again this year?

So, it's now firmly into Season 4? How did they manage to evade the New Kryptonians? Or Lex's clones?

/Starts worrying about Lois meeting somebody else nice./

Michael

Great part, but very, very sad.

Just one query: Should the first line in the second paragraph

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From there, Lois boarded a plane bound for Africa. The illegal African diamond trade seemed like the next juicy story waiting to be told.

Smuggling diamonds across the borders of South African countries was indeed a juicy story. It was also a very dangerous one. She met a few people that become invaluable to her survival. She also stumbled onto the hot topic of children being forced into the rebel army. That story earned her a broken arm and a scar above her left eye.

not be: Smuggling diamonds across the borders of Southern African countries was indeed a juicy story ?

Looking forward to what happens next and when Lois and Clark will one day see each other again!