The Long Road Home Part 34 - Comments - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Thoughts?

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Things could go back to normal.

Great chapter, but why does it leave me waiting for the other shoe to drop?

That phone conversation -- They have kryptonite, don't they? Who didn't they get in the raid?

Wow! Just when you think you see the light at the end of the tunnel for Lois & Clark, something seems to be waiting to step in and taunt them. Still on the edge of my seat with this one.

Awesome writing!

I enjoyed Clark's visit with Friskin and feeling like his former self. But....
Yes, my other shoe detector went off. It was just too easy. I'm thinking the "it" is the last shred of Kryptonite.

Artemis
OTOH, maybe I've been reading Rac's stories for too long

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All of that was well and good, but what really interested Lois was the fact that she could finally get her family back together under one roof. Things could go back to normal.

I'm with the above posters. Why do I think that things were just too easy? Something else has to happen.

Well, Clark said it - we are just waiting for the other shoe to drop.

Ann

I'm also with the others - the other shoe has to drop coz that was just too easy.

Looking forward to 35!

They're going to get Johnny's phone records and figure out who he was talking to, right? So they can go get that guy who had the Kryptonite? Right? So they can focus on more important things, like a new baby brother or sister for Jon?

Amber

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He rubbed the sleep from his eyes as he sat up in bed. “You sure it’s real?”

“Dude, I don’t know, it looks real to me.”

“Yeah, well we’ll have to test it,” Johnny mused aloud.

/chews nervously on finger nail until parts 35ff show up/

Michael

Thanks for your comments, everyone.

I know what you mean, Cookiesmom, about the other shoe dropping. Who knows what's coming up next?

Evelyn, I know, I'm terrible about letting my characters just be happy. I don't know why I can't just let things be.

Hi Artemis. If you've been reading too long, it's because I've been writing too long.

Thanks for your comments.

Iolan, I agree that Lois shouldn't even think these things, let alone say them out loud. Doesn't she know she's tempting fate?

Thanks for reading and commenting, Ann. There will be some B-plot coming up soon, I promise!

Thanks for your comments, DW.

Hi Amber. Hmm....I don't know if they can get Johnny's phone records. That's why he was using a pay as you go cell phone. If I were him, I'd be paranoid about my phone being tapped, too.

Michael, thanks for your comments. There should be more in the next few days.

I just want to give all of you a little notice as to what's going to be going on with my posting schedule. I'm about to move overseas for work for two years. I'll have internet access and I'll be able to keep writing and posting, but there might be a period of a few weeks during which time I won't be posting. I will try to get Part 35 up before I go.

Regards,

Rac

Good luck overseas, Rac. Write as often as you can.
regards
Artemis