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Posted By: TOC FDK: My Inspiration 8 - 03/28/10 05:58 PM
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Lois had watched with the world as Clark announced that he would not be a father any time soon. Apparently Lana Lang had not been pregnant at all. While Lois was sorry to hear of the woman's misfortune, she was incredibly relieved that a certain super man had not created life with his ex. For a brief moment she was ashamed of herself. But she just couldn't help how she felt.
I feel the same way. If Lana had had a baby with Clark, then that baby as well as Lana herself would always have come between Lois and Clark. I can see that it might have been interesting to examine what might have happened if Lois and Clark had been married while Clark had had to see Lana regularly to keep in contact with his child. That would have put a strain on his marriage to Lois, no doubt. Yes, it might have been interesting to explore such a situation, but personally I'm very glad that you didn't walk down that road, Squid. I didn't want Clark to have a baby with Lana, that's all I can say.

And poor Lois and Clark both want to see each other, and they nobly refrain from contacting each other for the other person's sake... oh, what a tangled web we weave!

And Clark called his book "My Inspiration", eh? And that's why you chose that title of your fic? Talk about being given proof that a guy loves you! 'To Lois with the deepest meaning' - well, since their love had become public knowledge anyway, Clark might as well tell the public how much he really loves Lois. Fascinating, though - it is as if the entire general public were some sort of messenger delivering Clark's love letters to Lois! And if the general public deliver Clark's love letters to Lois, then Lucy Lane sends Lois's love back to Clark:
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"I didn't realize what she meant to you until I read your book. And I sure as hell never imagined you meant so much to her.
She loves you, Clark! clap

Ann
Posted By: Shadow Re: FDK: My Inspiration 8 - 03/28/10 08:33 PM
Beautiful, angsty, and I'm still gushy at the end, regardless of all the torment!

Looking forward to more,
JD
Posted By: Seme Re: FDK: My Inspiration 8 - 03/29/10 10:17 AM
ohhhh....that was so endearing. That was sooooooo wonderful the way Clark wrote the book about his feelings for Lois and now the world knows that his heart belongs to her. I'm so jealous of Lois, what about me?(smiling)
Great installation...........Cant wait for part 9 to see how Lois and Clark interact at Barretts.(assuming Lois will be there also)

Great JoB!!!!
Posted By: DW Re: FDK: My Inspiration 8 - 03/29/10 12:05 PM
That was great - is it bad that I am happy that Lana wasn't really pregnant to begin with?

Anyhow, looking forward to part 9 and I think that Lois should definitely be at Barretts -wonder how Clark and Lois will act after not seeing each other for so long.

The "supposed" meeting Clark at Barretts would not perhaps be a kind of match-making idea to get Lois and Clark together again from the friends, would it?

Can we have part 9 soon, please? smile

Also, I must applaud your evilness in the previous part evil
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: My Inspiration 8 - 03/29/10 02:01 PM
The tumor was an inspired solution. Unless it was the hybrid form of a human/kryptonian pregnancy. dizzy

And now they're both pining away and not talking because they don't want to invade the other's space huh

More soonest!

Michael
Posted By: bellarase Re: FDK: My Inspiration 8 - 03/29/10 05:17 PM
THANK YOu for fixing the Lana thing!! I didn't want her to be pregnant with Clark's baby, LOL. GREAT chapter and I adore Scott. He reminds me of a friend of mine smile
Posted By: Seme Re: FDK: My Inspiration 8 - 03/31/10 09:50 PM
Not trying 2 be impatient n all but when will part 19 be posted? I'm dying here. I need my fix.
Posted By: robinson Re: FDK: My Inspiration 8 - 04/01/10 11:24 AM
Wow! Another great part. What a poignant and yet lovely love story. I love it. Hopefully the next part is soon and RL is cooperating

Kathy
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