FDK: Backwards III: House of Lane, 23/? - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

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Keep in mind I know very little about anything Kryptonian outside of the show [such as... Zod

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Next part - hopefully Mon/Tues. By then I should have been able to make the edits Kathy recommended to 24/25 and see where we're at =D.

Now - if only I could sleep... :p

Carol

New part!

See you back here tomorrow with FDK

Michael

I'm still wondering....which side to believe? Which side?

I bet Nor was hoping that Clark would have to go back to the ship to view the "evidence". He is probably nonplussed that Clark has the hologram viewer. (Of course, with this I'm assuming Nor is the bad guy.)

I like the council meeting. I was pleased to see all of the council members had proper Kryptonian two-part names. I was also interested to see General Zod on the council.

Bob

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Trey hesitated before speaking again. "The Council's... awareness of Lady Zara's true nature has only come since her departure from our planet. I am afraid that her father had something of a... blind spot where she was concerned. He believed she could do no wrong. However, since her departure, a number of things have come to light. Mistreatment of several of her servants both as a child and more recently, as well. Her..." He refused to look at Clark as he continued. "...relationship with Lt. Ching."

Poor daddy. His darling daughter is actually a tramp, sneaking off to do the help.

Still sort of waiting for the other shoe.

Michael, who has yet to see a Carol with just one shoe

My complaint is that these chapters are too short!

Can't wait to see what happens!

Amber