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Posted By: Artemis FDK: Reflections 22 - 05/22/09 09:22 AM
Wow, great part Max. Keep it coming. Methinks Lois figured something out about Superman.
cool
Artemis
Posted By: GamesAway Re: FDK: Reflections 22 - 05/22/09 01:33 PM
Wonderful part! Great story so far.
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As she stared into his eyes, suddenly everything fell into place.
smile1 She knows, she knows!
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If you see Clark, send him this way, and let him know that I’m alright.”
“I think I’ll just stay until the police arrive, and I’m sure you’re safe.”
“No you can go… really.
clap clap
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: Reflections 22 - 05/24/09 01:29 AM
A gripping part, Max clap

Clark's forensics actions were great.

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I doubt, seriously, that you have a super powered being at your beckon call, looking for you.
Hmmmm...

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Lois was bracing herself for another jolt, when suddenly the roof above her exploded. Within the space of a couple of seconds she found herself untied. The two thugs who had broken into her apartment lay unconscious on floor in front of her, with the cart laying mangled between them. She looked to her left and saw Superman holding her captor in the air with one arm by his shirt and coat. She heard him talking to the kidnapper, frightened by the rage in his voice. Slowly, and with much effort, she got up from her chair and made her way over to him. As she approached, she could actually see his eyes glowing red, probably from containing his famous heat vision.
Ooo, angry Superman, always great fun jump

You know, I'm almost certain that Lois knows. But if she does, she is sure keeping it hidden from the object of her observations.

The final boom, though, that took me completely off guard.

Michael
Posted By: robinson Re: FDK: Reflections 22 - 05/27/09 08:17 AM
Wonderful part and great chemistry between the 2. I love how you ended this part. Next part real soon OK?
Posted By: robinson Re: FDK: Reflections 22 - 07/10/09 09:58 AM
Max,

I hope everything is OK and you post the next part soon. I really like this story
Posted By: lcfan99 Re: FDK: Reflections 22 - 08/27/09 12:09 AM
Does anyone know when the next part of this story will be posted? I have really enjoyed this story and can't wait for what happens next. smile
Posted By: Artemis Re: FDK: Reflections 22 - 12/21/10 04:29 PM
I was thinking of this the other day. We're so close to the end! How about a big finish?
Maybe life has slowed down?
hail
Artemis
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