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Posted By: Lieta FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 28 - 02/18/09 12:01 AM
Again, thanks to Nancy, Michael, and Rel...

Posting next on Saturday, either at around midnight or noon CST... depending on when I go to sleep.

TOC | Part 28

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Lucy’s eyes grew huge. “You *what*?! When?!”

Lois blinked and regarded her sister warily.
Posted By: Ank. K. S. Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 28 - 02/18/09 04:38 AM
Very cool story and I loved your variations in I've Got a Crush On You!!!

I keep dreading that Luthor will figure out their secret(s) eek

Awaiting next installment! thumbsup thumbsup
Posted By: bobbart Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 28 - 02/18/09 08:10 PM
Fun! smile1

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<Good! Make sure you keep Blondie in her place...>
Watch out for Clark when he's around a Blonde. clap

Bob
Posted By: Crazy_Babe Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 28 - 02/19/09 12:21 AM
I liked this installment. It's funny to see Lois and Clark's thought interaction at the Metro Club!
Posted By: Mister Data Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 28 - 02/19/09 06:36 AM
Very different, but still interesting, take on IGaCoY.


Elisabeth
who is too lazy to log off the big guy
Fun additions clap

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Clark scrambled to his feet. <Lois where are you?>

<I’m backstage.>

<Stay there.>

<Clark...>

<At least until they stop firing, please?>
Duh!
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<I bet... but you know I’ll be careful, Clark...>

<Like you were careful last night?>

<I was doing my job.>

<Your job is running into a burning room?>
lol

Michael
Posted By: BJ Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 28 - 02/20/09 12:01 PM
Very interesting how the telepathy and Lois and Clark's budding romance changes the episode. Lex seems even more evil in this story than usual (/me shudders at the thought).

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Perry joined them, eying her trench coat. “So, Lois, how’s the undercover work going?”

She blinked. “Fine, Chief, why?”

Perry grinned. “Good, I didn’t think you’d *chicken* out on me...” He sauntered off laughing.

<I’m going to kill Jimmy...>
Cute. It's kind of nice to see Lois' ire directed at Jimmy, instead of Clark. Although, things like that are what showed Lois that Clark would stand up to her and that he wasn't (too) afraid of her.
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Good-looking men who save my life are handy to have around...”
I think I missed that. I remember Clark diving onto Johnny, but didn't see that he saved Toni too. The flirting between Toni and Joey (with running commentary by Lois) was great.
Posted By: Lieta Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 28 - 02/21/09 12:28 PM
Had some last minute edits that held up 29 peep

AnKS: I'm glad you liked it. As for Luthor, =X

Bob: Lol... yeah, that Clark and his blondes... though CJ actually ended up with a strawberry blonde... : devil:

And yeah, Clark got his revenge... and glad the different alias worked, =)

And I like Lois going for the story over her cover too. Too bad Pam had already had them kiss instead though, (<3 the alphabet series, =D)

And there's more Lex in the next chapter ~.^

Crazy_Babe: I'm glad you liked it, I certainly had fun with it, =)

Elisabeth: I'm glad it worked. =)

Michael: hehe, I have to do *something* to surprise you between betaing and posting... ~.^ And the 'wait until they stop firing' was from a suggestion by Nancy, =)

BJ: Hmm to Lex, =X As for the chicken comment, I think it was more likely that Perry heard about it from Jimmy or even saw it when Jimmy dragged it out in the middle of the newsroom... but this Lois just knows her boyfriend wouldn't dare embarrass her like that, ~.^ He does save her in the episode and it is what gets him hired. But it was very fun to have Lois' reactions to Clark and Toni. =)

And now off to post 29
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