FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 23 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Again, thanks to Nancy, Michael, and Rel...

Posting next on Friday, either at around midnight or 7AM CST... depending on when I go to sleep.

TOC | Part 23

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Clark sighed, “Actually... I was never much good at poker...”

Perry’s smile widened, “Oh... well that’s... even better!”

Clark gaped after his boss as the older man sauntered away.

<*You* weren’t good at poker?>

Clark turned and glared at Lois, <Jay and I played our own version...>

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Lois carefully donned the hood. Alan flipped a switch and her head disappeared except for her eyes. <Wow... Can you see yourself through my eyes, Lois?>

<Yeah, Clark, this is amazing...>

Nice shift from the episode and now I wonder how often Lois shadows Clark

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A while later, Clark pulled back. “Stay here tonight... I know Lucy’s out of town... You know I can sleep anywhere... You can even have the bed.”

Lois smiled at him. “Thanks, Clark...”

Awwww cute

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The next morning, Lois and Clark shared coffee in his kitchen while Alan still slept on the couch. A noise from the balcony made Lois frown. <Clark?>

<It’s me, Lois...> CJ slowly walked into the room, dressed as Superman.

So, when's CJ catching on?

Michael

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This was too funny and so like Lois to do that. Looking forward to the rest.

Nice.
This caught me off guard:

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Lois carefully donned the hood. Alan flipped a switch and her head disappeared except for her eyes. <Wow... Can you see yourself through my eyes, Lois?>

<Yeah, Clark, this is amazing...>

Did you say that they could do this earlier?

I don't remember noticing it.

This was my favorite Lois-to-CJ line

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“What happens to clear glass to make you see it?”

Lois frowned. <Cut to the chase, Professor Capeboy...>

Bob

I absolutely positively loved the telepathic banter and awaiting Friday..

Michael: no comment on shadowing =P As for your 'awwww' it's much nicer than them cutting to Lois sleeping against his table, isn't it? And =X about CJ =P

Crazy_Babe: I think it was Nancy (anonpip) who said that she loved how I portrayed the relationship between Lois and CJ, hehe

Bob: I pmed you, ~.^ and the biggest example of 'shadowing' is when CJ and Rachel discover her pregnancy. And I'm glad you liked the Capeboy.... it makes me giggle every time because of the anime character I associate with that nickname... if anyone gets that =P

AnKS: I'm glad the banter is still working, lol