Again, thanks to Nancy, Michael, and Rel...

Posting next on Tuesday, either at around midnight or 7AM CST... depending on when I go to sleep. And yes that is the right day,

TOC | Part 22

Preview:

Also, in case anyone's interested, some soundbites of Dr. John Kormendy ~.^


0:50-1:00, 7:30-7:40


1:44-1:55, 4:10-4:18

Edit: And CJ's boss is a hat's off to Carol's Van, ~.^

OMG, you've Doc Klein in here

Michael

Just to let you know I am still reading, but not good at writing feedback...

Jimmy knowing will get some getting used to for me (I think it was too fast for me).

I loved the scene at the bachelor auction and that Rachel would bet for her own husband. Hopefully nobody recognised her, this could really complicate things, as she is pregnant.

CJ and Rachel wealthy is also a nice touch. He really is not the chronic do gooder as Clark is, or am I horribly mistaken?

Looking really forward to the development of the relationship between Lois and Clark!

Fuzzy

This story is so sweet and lovely. I get a warm and cozy feeling wheneve I read it. Looking forward to the rest

I always love it when I see something that I didn't anticipate but just feels so right. Lex having CJ investigate Superman is wonderfully perverse. (Reminds my of why I feel the way I do about Lex.)

An of course, I LOVE this part. This is how it's supposed to be.

Bob

Awwwwwww! Great part!

Loved the introduction of Dr. Klein, the bachelor auction, the Lois and Cat interaction etc.

I too was blown away when Rachel made the winning bid. Never thought they would have that kind of money but Clark was right with his "government" explanation.

Wonderful ending! Can't wait for the next part!

Natascha

Michael: *waves* Hi! Glad you still like it? *goes back to hiding*

Fuzzy: Yeah, Jimmy and Lucy were an impulse that surprised me too when I wrote it. And your reading of CJ is correct. Glad you're still reading, =)

robinson: I'm glad you're still liking it, =)

Bob: I'm glad Lex is living up to your image of him, hehe. As for the donation... we'll see... And I'm glad you liked the declaration, =)

Natascha: I think Dr. Klein is more of a camio at this point, ~.^ But I'm glad you liked it, =)

Hiding is a good thing, Sara.

After what you did...

Or not did

Or well, you can count yourself amongst the evil writers now


Tease... /huffs/
Micheal

Still reading and enjoying the telepathic foursome. I really enjoyed the bits between Dr. Klein and CJ - I hope we get to see more of the Doc in future parts.

It's also nice to see that Lois is still thinking on her feet.

Not so sure it was wise for CJ Kent's (aka Charlie King's) wife to bid $50K on Superman. I figure Rachel didn't want to see her husband out on a date with just anyone, but she just made the Kent clan a whole lot more visible and interesting to Luthor with that stunt.

Michael: =P

BJ: I'm glad you're still liking it and we'll see on Luthor's interests =X

*leaves to post*