FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 19 - 01/21/09 11:28 PM
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 19 - 01/21/09 11:51 PM
Wonderfully deep part!
I don't think CJ is really cut out for this. Of course, Clark had a hard time with these trials also.
Well, he does. He just has different ones. 
Now THAT is the way to get Lex's attention! 
So, is CJ out of the pajama modeling, I mean super hero, biz? I guess we'll find out.
Bob
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He sped into the sky before Henderson could reply. Just outside the planet’s atmosphere he let loose a silent, anguished scream. All he could think of was what could have been.
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Rachel rolled over and stared at the ceiling. “And I thought *Clark* had issues...”
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Superman thought of the bomb and his eyes narrowed. “And I would think about *this,* Luthor... You don’t want to push me. Your transports could mysteriously start losing cargo, your warehouses could be found filled with ashes instead of riches... buildings you build or acquire may find that no matter what they do they cannot keep electricity or water running. Your manufacturing plants could find that their machines mysteriously produce parts that won’t work... Your money may be able to do a lot of things, Luthor, but can even *you* cover losses on that scale?”
So, is CJ out of the pajama modeling, I mean super hero, biz? I guess we'll find out.
Bob
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 19 - 01/22/09 04:26 AM
Wow, you had me totally fooled with the whole 'Superman-intimidates-Luthor' thing. I was absolutely sure it was CJ, not Clark.
Anyway, wonderful writing (as I have come to expect).
Anyway, wonderful writing (as I have come to expect).
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 19 - 01/22/09 07:23 AM
Wonderful chapter. I loved how much more intimidating Clark was in your version - Angry!Superman is sooo ...yum! His threat against Luthor's business certainly explains better than in the show why Lex saw Superman as such a challenge and why he stopped the tests in Metropolis.
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 19 - 01/22/09 01:50 PM
Wow! Another test, poor Jay! He really is taking htis hard but I never expected him not to be into this. He just tried to get Clark to wear the suit? Not bad but it would be easier with two Supermen around pretending to be one person no less. 
Loved the office revelation! And yeah Cat can be cool too.
Clark intimidating Luthor. Now that's something we very rarely see! I loved it! Clark really is cut out to be the hero here.
Natascha
Loved the office revelation! And yeah Cat can be cool too.
Clark intimidating Luthor. Now that's something we very rarely see! I loved it! Clark really is cut out to be the hero here.
Natascha
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 19 - 01/22/09 02:00 PM
Okay, there was tons of nice stuff in there but it's late and most of the comments are stuck in the BR-file and oh well...
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“I wish I understood this... bond... thing better so I could really yell at them...”
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 19 - 01/23/09 06:34 AM
Bob: I'm glad you liked it, =) And expect more Cat, ~.^ As for what will happen =X
Lara: I'm glad my surprises work, hehe. And thank you for the compliment, <3
BJ: I'm glad you liked how he reacted =)
Natascha: I tried to have CJ being supportive of Clark's dream of publicly helping but at the same time not be committed to it himself and even scared of the idea deep down. Which has blown up in their faces...
Michael: =P Great mini script...
Lara: I'm glad my surprises work, hehe. And thank you for the compliment, <3
BJ: I'm glad you liked how he reacted =)
Natascha: I tried to have CJ being supportive of Clark's dream of publicly helping but at the same time not be committed to it himself and even scared of the idea deep down. Which has blown up in their faces...
Michael: =P Great mini script...
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 19 - 01/25/09 04:41 PM
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“I remember. Partners, huh? You have my condolences, Kent.”
I also loved the way how Clark dealt with Lex.
I'm glad that CJ came back and I hope he learns to deal with that difficulties.
Re: FDK: Both Sides of the Coin, Part 19 - 01/25/09 08:30 PM
Kathryn84: I'm glad you liked it, =)