I hope you had fun reading the wrap-up of the A-plot The bit where Tez took Lois’ place in the wedding was actually the plot bunny that had started this entire mess because I *really* wanted to get even with Lex for the ARGH! And it was great to see that I’m not the only one who could get behind this idea

Part 5 will be up on Thursday before 1 a.m. ET or after noon ET

Preview
Well, I guess that’s the line you’ve been waiting for since part 1, huh?

Part 4 / TOC

Hope to see you all again in two days for grand finale.

Thanks!

Michael

Poor Lois - Perry knows, Bill knows - seems like everybody knows but Lois...

Placing tag....
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In part 3 I was wondering how you were going to wrap up that one hell of a mess (Lois, unconscious Superman, Lex, his HUNTER-fiancee, Zara, Ching, Nigel and to top it all... Lois' mom) in just two parts...

But you've proved yet again that only you can catch all those loose threads and hold them in a tight rein. That was one heck of an APlot.

Great job!

And this...
That's just like Lois!

Waiting for more...

*sniffs* I have to wait until thursday? Do you know how hard that is going to be? I cant' wait to see what happens when they get Superman back to Lois' and what will happen next.

LOVE this fic of yours!!

Originally posted by Dandello:

Well,that's what I don't much like about this fic - it's one of several lately which defines Lois as someone whose IQ is somewhere below zero!

Forty below zero?

Otherwise, though, this was a great ride! Hah! I was giggling at this:

I'll bet she tasted strange!!!

Ann

This is all SO great! I have been thinking of something really evil to do to Lex but this is WAY better than anything I've come up with.

To be honest, I was surprised that Bill and Perry were both able to spot Clark SO quickly. Now, I've never been a big fan of "galactically stupid" Lois but in this case I can see some justification. She KNOWS it's not Clark in the elevator because she KNOWS it's Superman. Bill and Perry have the advantage of seeing just Clark in the elevator with Lois.

Once she makes up her mind, her confidence in her own judgement sometimes blinds her to other points-of-view. That is the only defensible position for Lois concerning both Clark and Lex. I like that much better than galactically stupid. I can live with that. (Please have mercy Ann. )

Anyway, everyone else has said so but it bears repeating... Great A-plot!

Bob

Loved it Michael.... but I'm still waiting for the Lois-plosion from finding out just who Zara is =P

Now off to see if I can get Coin posted...

*yay* to the a-plot. And what Bob said about Lois. That's my reasoning too.

Real FDK tomorrow night and part 5 will be up just after midnight ET on Thursday (have enough time before heading to work on Thursday. So nothing with this afternoon nonsense

Michael

I *loved* your revenge on Luthor. He finding out in the last minute that his wife was a monster and that he had lost Lois was priceless. Pure evil. Luthor deserved this.

Now Lois will find out that Clark is Superman, that he's married and that the 'kryptonian cousin' is his wife.

Andreia

Really well done.

I figure that even Tez couldn't survive a multi story fall, especially if he hadn't really been the focus of the Kryptonians yet.

James

FDK!

Thanks, Bella! I know. I know. And I’m so happy to be able to evoke this sort of reaction. /whispers/ You’re in California, so you only have to wait till just after 9 p.m. on Wednesday Hope you will enjoy

/Ducks from Ann defending Lois/ I know Lois didn’t react to Superman in Clark clothes. But she’s really preoccupied and she knows it is Superman. But I hope her other deductions can make up for it a bit After all, she does put together a lot of things. She’s just blind on this spot.
Wow, thanks and again, the little things that slip in on a spur of the moment are those that get the best reactions. This is so… wow…

Bob, thanks so much. I’m glad I could entertain and thanks to detailing Lois’ thoughts like this. I really hoped to portray her like that.


You guys are a wonderful audience. Thanks again and see you in about 7 hours

Michael

Kewl part but where is your usual smut? Sigh...Laura

Hi Laura!

Thanks for FDKing and glad you enjoyed! I know about the smut. But I figured, giving Lex and Tez a wedding night might have been a bit strange

Michael

This was great, Michael.

I particularly liked this:
Very Lois!

I also particularly liked how Perry pointed out that the story didn't belong solely to Lois since it was Clark's work that started it all. It was very like Lois to forget that, but I would expect that for something this big, Perry wouldn't let her get away with that.

Now just how long until Lois gets a good look at Superman so she can see what Henderson and Perry see?

Hi Nancy!

Glad to see you found the time to catch up *yay* about the Lois and Perry remarks



Thanks and see you momentarily

Michael