Hello everyone! Thanks for the feedback. I may or may not get more feedback in the next two days, but whatever.
I figured my cliffhanger might bring people out! I know from exprience people are more likely to post if they are left with and ending like that. Unfortunately (or fortunately depending on how you look at it
), I'm not as good at coming up with the best possible cliffhangers as some authors are - ML comes to mind as the best at that.
Anyway, I digress.
Personal FDK
IntheAlias - Hi there. I don't know how to respond to that comment, other than to remind you that Kiley REALLY is sick at the end of chapter twenty-one.
Carol - The next part will be out on Wed.
Michael - Ah, I finally got hit with the axmen! I should have expected it for this chapter, huh? Same response as to IntheAlias. Part 22 will up on Wed.
Elisabeth - Good obesrvation. It does hit Clark VERY hard, although he's got more on his mind than that, as you will soon see.
Lieta - I will agree with you that Kiley "jumped the gun" here, objectively speaking. But she's had a stressful couple of weeks, and she just finally snapped. And quite frankly, I needed Larry in Metropolis for part 22, and this was the only way I could think of doing it.
Read more on Wed.