FDK: A Box of Swiss Chocolates, (10?) - 11/05/08 03:52 PM
Feedback would be appreciated. Intense chapter, huh?
Re: FDK: A Box of Swiss Chocolates, (10?) - 11/05/08 06:57 PM
Oh, poor Kiley! Still, I worry a little about her reaction to him. I think she left enough clues that Larry could figure out she's Superwoman. While I'm not sure his anger would not melt away once he knew the truth and he would be supportive, I'm not 100% convinced either.
Re: FDK: A Box of Swiss Chocolates, (10?) - 11/06/08 11:43 AM
Nice part, Sara 
So Kiley told her parents about a potential boyfriend. She could of course also told them about chocolate
Not sure what to make of Larry here. Not knowing who you're talking to often loosens your tongue but there has to be a reason for his resentment beyond the indoctrination by his dear uncle.
Michael
So Kiley told her parents about a potential boyfriend. She could of course also told them about chocolate
Not sure what to make of Larry here. Not knowing who you're talking to often loosens your tongue but there has to be a reason for his resentment beyond the indoctrination by his dear uncle.
Michael
Re: FDK: A Box of Swiss Chocolates, (10?) - 11/06/08 08:21 PM
She sure wore her heart on her sleeve in this one. She told her parents much less than she should have and told Larry much more than she should have.
Elisabeth
Elisabeth
Re: FDK: A Box of Swiss Chocolates, (10?) - 11/07/08 05:10 PM
Nancy - Yeah, Kiley got a rough deal in this chapter, didn't she? Wait and see on the rest.
Michael - That's true, if she told them that she was dating a chocolate shop guy, Lois might warm up to him, huh But I think she was reluclant to reveal anything more.
And yes, not knowing who your talking to DOES loosen the tongue. That's what I was going for, here. As for why Larry believes the way he does, it will be explained later.
Elisabeth - I will agree with you that she wore her heart on her sleeve. But even though she had wondered about how Larry felt about Superwoman, his comment still came out from left field for her. Particularly considering she had such a positive view of their relationship when she first got there.
Michael - That's true, if she told them that she was dating a chocolate shop guy, Lois might warm up to him, huh
But I think she was reluclant to reveal anything more. And yes, not knowing who your talking to DOES loosen the tongue. That's what I was going for, here. As for why Larry believes the way he does, it will be explained later.
Elisabeth - I will agree with you that she wore her heart on her sleeve. But even though she had wondered about how Larry felt about Superwoman, his comment still came out from left field for her. Particularly considering she had such a positive view of their relationship when she first got there.