This was structurally so clever to jump back to where we stepped into the alternate 'beginning.'
Many years ago the hotel had been purchased and redecorated before the upper floors were completely gutted and rebuilt.
This brings me a malicious kind of joy, for you to write the destruction of Lex's assets.
Muhaha.
I miss what he’s saying as I watch the man smile and tip his old fashioned bowler hat at me before walking around a corner and out of my sight.
CUTE! He's just checking in.
I don't think Wells could just let things be. He'd have to stop by and check out his meddling in its fulfillment.
An overwhelming sensation of gratitude and contentment settles over me and I can’t imagine my life being anything other than what it is right now with this amazing man by my side.
This is such an all-encompassing, satisfying ending!
I'm sad this is over, but I had such a great time with this story!
(Also, what's the other favorite HoL story that you've written??)
I'm glad you liked the ending! Thank you for the wonderful comments.
The other HoL story I did was
Aftershocks and this is the unedited version. As I pick away at the editing suggestions, it will be added to the archive if I can get my butt in gear.
