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#133308 04/06/08 07:10 AM
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Hey gr8shades,

I'm glad that you've posted this, I really enjoyed it smile

This is just a random line of text inserted to avoid giving anything away for people who use "Today's Active Topics".

Since I just luuuuurve LnC's stakeout in The Phoenix, I have quite a good guess for this one.

You mention that your 'character' is working "undercover mostly" and with the last lines ("My broken body falling lifeless to the floor") I think it has to be that poor light bulb Clark 'kills' to distract Lois smile

I also want to say that you did a great job.

This is so well written, I hope you will post a fic soon - I would absolutely love to read it smile

Thanks for resurrecting this idea, hopefully a few others will join in smile

Best,

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I have have to concur with Eva on this one smile

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Gr8shades, I'm very proud of myself because this is the first story of this kind where I've actually managed to guess who the narrator is!

This was really cute. I especially liked the line about the lightbulb's job not being what we were thinking. wink

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Okay I suck. I totally couldn't think of who it was. For some reason I was thinking a rat but I didn't remember a rat getting "blown away." But after reading Eva's genius response, I agree.

It was the light bulb. laugh


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I tweaked this a bit last evening to make it (hopefully) better.

Eva, I’d love to post a fic, I just need an original idea and a whole lot of perseverance, because, and don’t tell anyone this, I do actually have the time. I’m in awe of people who can produce long, multi-part stories. I think vignettes are about my limit.

Thanks everyone. And yes, it was the ‘one defective bulb’.


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For some reason I was thinking a rat but I didn't remember a rat getting "blown away."
I didn't remember that either, which is good because I don't think I'd have gotten over the trauma of seeing LNC turn into a Tarantino bloodbath for rodent viewers... goofy

Cute idea to make it the lightbulb, Eva - I don't know how you guys come up with these.

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Okay, I'm guessing before I check what others have said. I'm guessing the light bulb in the lamp on the yacht when Lois and Clark had their almost first date.

And, by the way, I loved the story.


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