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You can find the [i]Another Dimension, Another Time, Another Lois[/i] TOC here.

Well, I'm just going to ...

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BTW: Is 'Dancing with the Stars' or 'Game (Gang?) of Thrones' on tonight? It sure is quiet on the boards. It must be May sweeps.

Ah, sweeps. One of the many reasons I love May.

Great chapter! I'm a little dissappointed that Martha didn't let Lois back in and tear into her, but I suppose the story must go on.

Um, when is Clark going to let her know just why he's so melancholy all the time? Something to do with a man in tights? Or is it one of those situations where he only knows what Lois knows at the time (or at least, that's what he will claim)? Methinks that will not go over so well. And Lois seems so sensitive about the lying issue, especially now of all times, after discovering Luthor's betrayal of her. Surely Clark sees this, right? Right...? Clark!

Patrick? Patrick?! No! There's no Superman here! Don't go, Lois! Don't do it!

Can't wait for the next chapter! It's not as much FDK as usual, but I'm working my way back into the game. Again, great job so far!

Whoops. Double post. Apologies.

Originally posted by Mouserocks: I'm not so sure: in the Prologue, Alt-Clark wanted to go to another dimension to save another Lois. I found the quote:

So Alt-Clark will go to this Lois'dimension and he'll save her from Patrick. Anyway, that's my guess.

And after that? Will Dream-Clark be replaced by Alt-Clark? And will Dream-Clark disappear? Or will Alt-Clark have Dream-Clark's memories? I don't know... and now I have an headache.

Post very soon, please: you CANNOT leave us like this.

Still loving this story!

Yes, sad that Martha and Jonathan did not give Lois more of a chance. So, I'm guessing Martha is *not* dreaming about Clark. If she were, (a) she might have recognized Lois as his work partner and/or the Daily Planet as his place of work, and (b) she might have recognized him from Lois's descriptions. Maybe he will make a dream appearance now, and that will be what brings M&J to Metropolis looking for Lois and ready to help? I *do* hope they come around and help before she manages to save him, because they're going to feel an awful lot of guilt otherwise. Unless, of course, all of this is wiped from their memories when Clark comes alive. This is all so complicated, I think now *I'm* getting a headache!

I had totally forgotten about the prologue. Hmm, interesting posibilities here. I'm looking forward to reading more and seeing where you are going to take this.

Mouserocks: Ah, Martha. I think the gentle readers need to remember what this must have been like from her POV. Here's a woman who tells Martha that she's looking for a tall, dark, and handsome man roughly her own age. Then Martha finds out that Lois is a reporter and she's actually looking for Martha's "son" -- who happens to be a dead baby alien, she had found 30 years before; so initially she thinks "our secret is out". Then Lois tells her that "Clark" grown-up self is communicating with her from the beyond and that she can save him from that fate. Does Lois sound like someone sane enough for Martha and Jonathan should believe? Especially if Lois hasn't mentioned Clark's most unique secret? NOPE! She's nutso, and the Kents don't want to have anything to do with her. Don't worry, their part in this story isn't over yet.

Clark's reticence in Smallville will be explained later.

Yep, there's some of that, and something else.

Glad I didn't scare you away with my lack of reaction from the Kents. Phew!

Nope. I believe Clark's exact words (from Part 16) were:

That is all of a clue I can give at this time.

Terribly sorry. I have more Headache shots left. Want one? And I'm looking forward to not being killed before I can post Book 2.

Late Saturday in the US: for me, it will be Sunday morning for breakfast. It is SO long. I'll have the time to find a lot of interesting (or crazy) theories. I already have one: Dream-Clark is beginning to have Alt-Clark memories. It's why he was so quiet in Smallville: he was remembering his parents'death.

Well I knew Martha wasnt talking to Clark but that doesn't mean she wasn't dreaming about him. Or maybe it does mean that in your story but I was thinking that maybe it didn't. Or something.

Sorry, I can't speed up the posting schedule, because I'm trying to write Book 2 while posting Book 1 (this story). And if I quicken the posting schedule for this story I'll have to slow it down for Book 2 and Michael has told me that is unacceptable.

I'm okay with addiction to my stories. Thank you.

So, you still want that Headache shot then?

Oh no! The druid wannabe! Yep, for this one it's gonna need to be Alt Superman to the rescue.

Maybe he will also be the connection to Herb that Lois needs.

Hmmmmm.

Maybe in a 'roundabout, that wasn't supposed to happen' way.

Run, Lois, run! You had better get your memories of the past back on this one, because you are in a lot of trouble, and the pepper-spray might not make it.

With eight more episodes left, I assume that Lois will not perish in this episode, but she needs to get Clark/Superman back in present history. She is using up her nine lives, quickly, in your story. Glad she's in your hands, and you like Lois, because she'd be in trouble if you wanted to rub her out.

Here for at least 8 more,
Pat

While everyone's picking up on the druid from Ireland I'm picking up some serious juju about Star. I can't wait to see what comes from that.

Pat: Glad you plan on sticking with me until the end. <<cough, cough>> Can you remember that pledge around Part 23? (Psst/ You won't want to miss the Epilogue either.)

No, Lois did not die upon meeting Patrick. Oh, you mean, the next Part. No, Lois does not die in Part 18, either.

Well, the story IS from her POV. If I rubbed her out... well, that would make that aspect more difficult. Well, okay, not ALL your questions, otherwise why would you read the rest of the story. MOST of your questions will be answered. The WHO... okay, SOME of the who. The WHAT... okay, I just kind of touch on the what. The HOW... fine! I hardly touch on the how at all. The WHERE... Nope, I kind of miss this one altogether. The WHY... Well, that's obvious... kind of, sort of, not really at all. And, the major one, the WHEN! Yes, I completely tell you WHEN everything is going to happen in my vague, unclear fudging sort of way. But ALL... er.... MOST... um... SOME of your questions will be answered in Part 18. Never mind.

There’s not going to be a new part on Monday, right? Still have time to catch up? Also, Game of Thrones. On Sunday. Well, Monday, for us temporally challenged. Plus, May-sweeps are cool. Have you seen all the drama and cliffies on the boards, lately?

So, they really want her gone, then? Or was it just to make sure she didn’t swipe any bathrobes? Or pitchforks.

/imagines Kents and remaining guests huddled behind door, holding a gun and praying the evil monster leaves.

Doesn’t she have lock-picks?

Beep Buup. Beep. “Hello? Sheriff Harris? This is Martha Kent. Yes, The Farm. We’ve got a mentally unstable former guest stalking the premises. Yes, we do own a shotgun, but I’d prefer not to use it. No, it’s just that entrails are so hard to get out of the tulips. You’re going to send someone? Good. Doc Mecken? Horse tranquilizers? Okay. Thanks.”

/imagines this to convince Martha to open the door. Nor.

How about Noncorporeal American? Disembodied American? Corporally challenged?

Geez, Clark. Pick one and stick to it.



/points towards happy double standard/

So, happy ending not guaranteed, then? Poor customer, getting a real date-experience ‘date’.

Really, Clark?

Good to have such a caring pimp.

Oooooh! Kinky!

What *is* it with Clark? He keeps sending those mixed signals.

That’s what Clark gets for being cocky. Also, will the mask bring the ghost out of Lois?

Michael

Um... Michael:, I posted part 18 last night (my time). Part 19 will be posted late Monday night before I go to bed (I used to post first thing in the morning, but then I spent all day distracted with checking for FDK; this way, I can give people the opporunity to read and comment, and I get some sleep. Also it's also a boon for those non-US readers who wake up shortly after or around the time I post.)

Hmmmm. Is someone else posting stories besides me, DC, and Ken? Oh, those new Smallville & Supergirl stories? Um... I haven't checked them out because I'm STILL waiting for Netflix to buy more S4 Smallville DVDs, so I don't want to be spoiled by reading about events I don't know about. I'm not really familiar with the the Kara character... it's on my to-do list, but not for today. Hmmm, lets see...
1) reply to Michael's FDK for 17
2) write FDK to Ken's newest part
3) review Part 18 of Book Two, add finishing touches, send off to Beta.
4) weed strawberry patch.
5) reply to FDK for Part 18 (if I can sneak back onto the computer)
6) start writing Part 19 of Book 2 (see above note)
7) sleep

About cliffies, well, I LOVE 'em.

They don't supply bathrobes and the pitchforks are in the barn, if she really wants them, which I can't see her doing.

Lois is the only guest at the moment.

Right, THAT's the way to show them she comes in peace.



Nor? He's there? Is *that* why the Kents aren't coming the door?

Part 2 - FDK -

He's conflicted? Anyway, it's hard not to send mixed signals when you're actually one man with two personalities that you don't want your true love to know about.

Yes, you did. And, yes, I did, back in high school. I remember lots of sand, blue eyes from eating too much salt, and nasty huge worms that liked piggy back rides, but that's about it.

Hmmm. Perhaps, I need to reprase. "Perhaps you'll remember that next time BEFORE you encourage me to sell myself to the highest bidder!"

The capital city of Pacifonesia got blasted by Bob Fences because they refused to pay the ransom / extortion / blackmail money (see "Contact" Not Jody Foster movie) by the machine he concocted that Superman should have stopped and ended up hurting Lois, because she HAD to be in the room with them, causing Clark to break up with her for her own good. Nicknamed here as the "death ray."

I'm sorry, should I have warned you that you needed to delux BC counter for my story? Oh, WAIT, I did. I remember stating earlier, LOTS of People Would Die! <<mumbles>> Nobody believe me. Not everything I write is sarcasm people! Most of it, but not everything!

Too bad Lex Luthor isn't alive. He'd love to get his hands on one of those. It's like the super-duper-toaster!

Clark "The Tank" Kent?

More.

Hmmm. So adding in the discussion about the hair-cut isn't enough, huh? Hmmmm. I'll have to get back to you.

But at least she's as wishy-washy as Clark!



Really must check out that show. It's less violent than "The Walking Dead" right?

Have you noticed that Superman never leaves the gag on her after he rescues her? He's never heard her be silent for 5 minutes.



A woman's got needs, that a ghost boyfriend just can't handle.

No.

Yep.

And into Patrick! Hmmmm, interesting theory.

Was going for part 19.

Michael