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#64508 06/28/09 11:58 AM
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FDK goes here.

Tomorrow's post: probably early/mid evening smile .

Thanks!

Carol

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Heh, I'm betting Dan hasn't gotten the hint yet. And now I want cookies, darn you! laugh


"You need me. You wouldn't be much of a hero without a villain. And you do love being the hero, don't you. The cheering children, the swooning women, you love it so much, it's made you my most reliable accomplice." -- Lex Luthor to Superman, Question Authority, Justice League Unlimited
#64510 06/28/09 01:14 PM
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Lovely, wonderful chapter. Loved all the intimate affection between Lois and Clark -- not intimate in a sexual way, but intimate in a quiet, loving way that's almost more striking. I can't see how Dan could miss it (certainly Sam, Jon, and Martha didn't), but it will be interesting to see if he's willing to read the writing on the wall or if he tries to give it one last shot at the Corn Festival. Either way, I can't wait to see what happens next for our favorite couple. smile

Is it tomorrow yet? smile

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I agree with Kathy - the affectionate intimacy was well written and great!

#64512 06/28/09 06:54 PM
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Big ditto. I like quiet warm fuzzies.

JD


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Yeah, what they said. Romp on!


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#64514 06/29/09 10:07 AM
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[Oh, and Michael, these chapters are way shorter than anything else I've ever written so 10 chapters here is like 5 or less in most other things I've written so take that into consideration too. /me forgot to put that in the FDK thread but doesn't wanna go back...]
Yeah, I guess I get the picture blush Oh well, daily Carolfic. I really shouldn't complain wink

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Lois was suddenly very aware that she was sitting next to Clark on the very small loveseat and that her hand was resting in his. He'd grown a bit emotional as he'd talked about finding his ship, seeing it for the first time, and she'd almost unconsciously reached out for him. His fingers had curled around hers and she was in no hurry to move it. Let Dan think what he would.

She felt his eyes on their hands and Clark squeezed lightly before moving away.

Lois felt tears begin to well up in her eyes but she swallowed them back until she felt Clark's arm come to rest on the seat behind her, his thumb brushing against her shoulder. She glanced up at him gratefully and he smiled back, leaning over to whisper to her. "Think that'll help him move on?"
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

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"And you didn't try to see if he was alive?" he verified.

Lois glared at him. "You know how hard it is to get down there. No, we didn't try to make sure he was still alive."
I know that it's not supposed to be funny, but still clap

Fun part, Carol, looking forward to 17 smile

Michael


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#64515 06/29/09 11:35 AM
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/me waves

Glad you guys liked it smile . Now to see if Dan takes the hint wink .

More in a minute.

Carol


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