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Well, here's the next part. I have to say that I'm a little unsure about the end of this section, along with (and more particularly) part 27. If anyone has any suggestions, please let me know.

Chris

Yay!!!

/me eating his nails wondering if they can catch Luthor.

more soon

Jose

Yay, evidence and more evidence! Hurrah Though I have a sneaking suspicion that the stakeout won't run as smoothly as hoped... my crystal ball says something about Lois getting into trouble

I confess, though, that it took me most of the section to start to remember anything about Pagliano. He's the guy that's got stocks Luthor wants, and they're willing to bump him off and buy them from his widow, right? I can see he'd be annoyed by that plan.

And I love the rapid pace at which we're getting all these sections! Keep it up, Chris <g>

PJ

Come on, let's not fool around here! Do they catch Luthor or not?

Nan

Hi,

Great part.

Chris

WOW! A fantastic part!

I can't wait to see what happens at the stakeout.

Tricia

Clever teaser instalment. You set up the gentle reader by implying that this is where we get to nail Luthor, but you manage to draw it out long enough so we will have to wait until the next part to see what actually happens.

Like Pam, It took a while to remember who Pagliarillo (or whatever his name is) was, but that's just a product of being old. The memory is one of the first things to go. At least that's my excuse, I don't know what Pam's is

Tank (who says, of course Lois will find a way to get into trouble)

Hi Chris,

I've been following your story all along. RL has made responding difficult. Anyway, your writing is so precise. I really enjoy all of the description that you use. People's looks and actions, dialog inferences, and the tediousness of a stakeout are all included. Very impressive. You are a gifted writer. The scene is now all set for a powerful conclusion. I can't wait...

Now, write-on!
Anne

Chris
another wonderful part
getting closer to getting Lex
now - keep Lois out of trouble - Clark may not be able to save her
more soon please
merry

Thank you, as ever, for the comments!

Jose and Nan: you'll find out in the next part whether or not they catch Luthor... but remember that the story isn't quite over yet.

Pam: you will have to make up your own mind as to whether Lois gets in trouble or not at the stakeout. And, yes, you're right about who Pagliano is.

Maria: good to see that you were laughing in all the right places. To be honest, I'm not sure where Pagliano's wife is, but I think we can safely assume that she isn't at home.

Tricia: thank you! (Uh, they have a plan?)

Tank: why do you think Lois would get into trouble?

Anne: thank you, thank you, thank you! Delighted to have you on board, and even more delighted by your very generous praise.

Merry: I'll do my best to keep Lois safe... for now.

Chris