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Whaddaya mean there's no FDK for this yet?!

I totally meant to read this last night, but catching up with RL again after a weekend of carefree fun... hard!!

Commenting as I read... as usual.

Mmmm?? Video tape was edited with different footage to make it look like he did? He was drugged and made to go get the sample? He was *hypnotized* and made to get the sample? It's not even him at all on the images?

....so many possibilities! agh! the suspense is killing me.

*melts* I love that you made her remember the whole entire proposal. This is the absolute most amazingly romantic thing that I've ever heard (the bit about the Earth opening up at his feet) and I can never get enough of it. *Thank you* for putting it all there. I'll be crediting you with my day-long dreamy smile.

Ahhh... I have to quote that one too, I'd forgotten this one. Comes in a close second!! *dreamy sigh*

Oh? I thought she had said so precisely. Oh well, maybe I've been fed some Nirvana, too?

<looks around suspiciously at coworkers...> nah... they're not smart enough to do that! And the only Nirvana they know is the one you'd hear on the radio. The things they're missing!!

We'd miss Clark too, you know... *sniffles*

mmm? what does he want with Dan? ooooh... wait, wait... he doesn't want to hurt him, does he? (says the reader, with a lopsided smile)

heeee! I thought of that. I did, I did! It was in my list of hypothesis before! Heee!! <pats self on the back>

Oooh! he does want to hurt him... (is it wrong that I'm smiling? It is, isn't it? dammit, I've turned into a stone cold meanie...)

erm... talking about meanies...

Oooh!!! I can't wait! I can't wait!!

Hurry back!!!!

Ah it is coming to a climax! I can't wait to find out how Lois gets out of this mess and gets on with her life with Clark. Laura

Did you *have* to make Lois scream? I already had a headache, thank you very much...

Sorry. I'm distancing.

I am glad Lois regained all her memories, and she doesn't even seem ticked-off at Clark over that whole Contact-breakup fiasco. So typical of her to be more worried about Clark's mental health than her own physical health.

Quick thinking on Clark's part that he had to get Dan to tell him the things he'd already heard, as he had no excuse for having heard it. No cape, Knox said? No problem. Clark Kent will save the day

Just as soon as the next part is posted.

So that's gonna be posted soon.
Right?

PJ

As a-plots go, this was great, DJ. It was a virtual rollercoaster of revelations and good and bad developments. You sure sent us hurtling between hope and despair!

I loved Lois's regaining her memories. So romantic. There's no doubt that her good memories of Clark mean more to her than her bad ones, eh? )

Happy Easter, DJ! (And Sue, and Clark in her closet, and Lois!)

Ann

YAY, more revelations.

Ah, of course. Isn't the fail-safe password always MKULTRA?

Thanks for giving Lois her memories back. Like others, I enjoyed experiencing all those wonderful, WAFFy moments again with her. That's right, I skipped over every reference to Clark acting like a lunkhead and read only the sweet things he said to her.

I'm with Lois, I feel a little sorry about Dr. Peterson. I hope they can still get the evidence they need to clear Dr. Klein without him.
Hurry, Clark. Come quickly - Knox is absolutely terrifying.

Please hurry back with the conclusion.
BJ

Sorry, I don't have time for FDK at the moment.
I really loved this part. Lois has her memory back

Okay, no time to reply to fdk yet... I'll be back later to do that...

But I did want to say "thank you" to BJ for reminding me that I had forgotten to post my "note" about MKULTRA. I will go back into this post and do that real quick. MKULTRA was the code name for the experimentation that the government had done with mind-control and drugs. Way way back in an earlier chapter (when Dr. Klein and Clark were shot at, at STAR LABS, Dr. Klein told Clark about Project MKULTRA.

Here's a link to it on Wikipedia if you're interested. <g> If you *had* remembered what MKULTRA was... then you were probably expecting that little *shocking* surprise that came later.

But I did intend to post a note about it... I'll go back and fix that.

Thanks!

Yay for Lois getting her memories back. Hurry up and save her, Clark! Great part!

Jackie

Ditto others!! More soon! Now would be good... .
Carol

Ahh! Save her Clark! I got so wrapped up in reading this chapter I forgot it wasn't a complete story. When I went to click for the next part I was like wait... WAIT!? WHERE IS THE FINAL PART?? NOOO!!!! I can't wait to see how Clark and Dan save her. ...Assuming they do..... but it would be really terrible if they didn't, don't you think? That Knox fellow is quite honestly one of the creepier villians I've read. 40 feet underground just sounds so... final. I'd be terrified.
Loved that chapter, can't wait for the next one!
Laura

Great part! Can't wait for the conclusion.

Hurry back soon and post it!

Great post!

Wooo! Another great part!

*sniff sniff* Finally!! Wooo!!

*tears* That is so sweet. I’m tearing up here a bit at my desk.

NONONO! You guys are doing this just to f- with me aren’t you?? AREN’T YOU?? Picking on poor innocent little Jojo. *sniff sniff* (Yeah I know… no one believes I’m innocent and you aren’t just doing it to pick on me… but I can pretend here in my little delusional world. You should come join me… the cheese wiz is FABULOUS here Sue.)

Please get there in time Clark! Please let Lois be ok!

Great chapter guys… I’m on the edge of my seat! ^_^

Hello everyone! Whew, RL has been tough the last few days. I'm so glad everyone enjoyed this part!

Hi Lara! (Yes know all about that RL. <g>)

Hah! I love all your theories, one of them is correct...

You're welcome for the dreamy smile. Glad you enjoyed her regaining her memories. And I'm just giggling that the proposal we wrote is a close 2nd for you to the one on the show - yippee. <g>

No. All along Lois had tried to be very careful how she worded things so that she didn't give away that CK = Supes Back in a very early chapter she actually started to write CK = Supes and then erased it, realizing that could be dangerous to have written down. However, that being said, someone who isn't galactically stupid <g> might have been able to figure things out. Better safe than sorry.

LOL at your suspicion of your co-workers... but yes, they probably no nothing of Nirvana... kind of like Mindy Church *ahem* thought it was a rock band. <snort>

<sigh> Poor Dan... maybe you'll feel a little sorry for him before this is all over... <eg> Thanks for the fdk, Lara!!!


Hi Laura! Thanks for the fdk! Yes, we are almost there. Hold on tight, it's gonna be a bumpy ride.


Hi Pam! <me pats> Sorry about the headache. Hope you are feeling better. <g> Thanks for the fdk! "Clark Kent will save the day" -- we all hope so. <g> Since Sue is on a camping trip and needs to look at it one last time, it probably won't be posted before next Tues/Wed per our normal schedule <DJ ducks and runs>


Ann! I just always about faint when you tell me my a-plotting is good (it's such a compliment seeing that you prefer b-plots to a-plots). Glad you enjoyed the rollercoaster so far - buckle in, it's gonna get bumpy.

Heh - Sue and I are evil... but there are limits to our evilness. <g> I don't know if we've found them yet <snort> but there are limits.

Mmmm, thank you for all that chocolate <brrrp> But now I have to go run a couple of extra miles on my treadmill tonight. <g>

Thanks so much for the fdk Ann! <hugs>


Hi BJ! Yes, more "revelations" <g> Hope MKULTRA made more sense after the little note I posted. <whoops> Thank you for the fdk and we'll be back soon!


Hi Babsi! That's okay, thanks for taking the time just to say that you're still reading and enjoying. Thanks!


Hi Jackie! Thanks for the fdk. I'm glad you enjoyed her getting her memories. <g>


Hi Carol! LOL... how about by next Wednesday? Thanks for commenting.


HI LauraS! Poor Laura <me pats> the next part will be soon... uh... just a week... that's not that far, is it? Yes, it would be really really awful and terrible if they didn't save her. I'm glad you think Knox is creepy. He struck me in Whine, Whine, Whine as being a pretty stone-cold hard-hearted individual - glad we are portraying him well. Thanks for the fdk!


Hi Symbolic! Thanks for the fdk. Glad you enjoyed this part.


Hi James! Thank you!


Hi Jojo! <giggles> Yes, what you had been waiting for... for the last, um, 20 parts? <snort> For Lois to regain her memory. Ooooh, yay, tears! <shakes her head at herself>

Yes, we are totally doing this just to f...err... mess with you. <g> And there is more to come <eeep!>

<pat, pat> Yes, we did it. But if you've ever done research on electroshock therapy... well, it's not likely Lois is dead from it... but of course she has been taking Nirvana... so who knows how it interacted with that... hmmmm....

Yippee! So glad you're on the edge of your seat. Thanks for the fdk Jojo!


Thank you so much everyone! The comments are wonderful!

-- DJ

Great part! Sorry there's no real feedback - no time, no time.

Thanks Nancy - and I've told you before that I'll take any fdk any way I can get it... short, long, or anything in between. <g>

Thanks again everyone. Hope to have part 23 up on Wednesday <starts to hold breath but thinks better of it>

-- DJ