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In which Lois talks about trust, CJ ponders the nature of disguise, and Tessa talks some more about Toni Taylor... Oh, and the plot advances, albeit just a little.

Chris

Poor Tessa... and poor CJ, forced to skulk around in the dark! Not that it's a surprise, of course. And at least they have an eye witness, but I don't think her testimony is gonna be enough to nail Luthor to the wall. Still, it's another step along the way!

Hurry up and post more -- I keep worrying that CJ's powers are going to give out at a very awkward moment

PJ

Hi,

Great part.

Chris

Another excellent part!

I'm thoroughly enjoying this and look forward to reading more.

Tricia

Sorry to come in late on this.

So, Lex killed Toni, himself. Not completely surprising, actually.

But now, CJ has made a promise, and I think he won't allow himself to weasel out of it with word games, so I wonder what he's going to do.

Nan

Chris, you're building the evidence against Luthor really well. Lois and CJ should have a good case against him so Tessa's statement is a beginning, but not enough yet.

This is fascinating.

gerry

Chris,
good segment
I too feel for Tessa-
don't take too long to get Lex or Tessa won't believe Superman will keep his promise to her
more soon please
merry

Chris, I really must apologise for getting so far behind with this one. I will try to catch up, or maybe - since I'm now so far behind - wait until it's finished.

But I did just want you to know that I'm still hanging on in there <g> and it's not because I've grown tired of the story that's been keeping me from commenting.

Stupid RL.

LabRat

Anyone we know?

I continue to be amazed at your ability to breathe life into OCs and other secondary characters. I loved Bibbo. Tessa was great.

And they had an honest conversation *again*. You're scary, woman! Wendy and the other members of AA (Angst Anonymous) will ride you out of town on a rail if you aren't careful.

You gave us a great glimpse into CJ's mind with his struggle at making a deliberate appearance. Go ahead, CJ. Jump. The water's just fine.

So... Tessa gives CJ some excellent clues. Lois will be crowing that her idea worked. Time for some more great investigative partnership, I think.

MORE!

Hazel

Well, it's Monday, so that surely means that it is time for me to catch up on my 'correspondence' and then post the next part...

Pam: I'd love to tell you that you are right on all counts, but that would ruin the story!

Maria: Mrs Cox was one of the people (the other being Jules Johnson) about whom Lois and CJ could find no recent information. They know they existed, but they couldn't find any current information about them; they were / are wondering whether or not they were dead.

A trip to Bolivia, eh? Now why would they want to go there? (Coming up soon.)

Nan: I'll leave it up to you to decide if CJ is a weasle or not.

Gerry: you're right. They need more evidence. Will they get it?

LabRat: no problem. Hey, I never seem to read anything so I can't talk.

Hazel: This, actually, is one of the areas about which I feel least secure with regard to the story. There really is remarkably little relationship angst in it, so I hope I'm being scary in a good way here!

It's also one reason why I end up thinking about this in terms of a A-plot driven story. What problems CJ and Lois have mostly seem to stem from that.

You tell him Hazel. He needs a lot more convincing!

Tricia, Merry: thanks for posting too.

Chris