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I love how you put a spotlight on the disadvantage of having superhearing. I wish more stories would explore that.


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Thank you, I am glad you liked it, I think so too. It would be great to explore the disadvantages of his powers and the effect on his psyche more.


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This is such a wonderfully sad moment in time. I'm always looking for ways to cleverly, actively use Clark's powers, but this is such an evocative reminder of how they affect him, not just how he affects the world around him.

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She needed to protect her broken heart.
Such a heartbreaking line, coming from him.

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Lane and Kent. The hottest news team in town.
This is an utterly crushing ending line.

This was such a great little pummeling of my heart! whinging


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