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FDK: Away From the Sun 32 #29336 04/24/06 11:15 AM
Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,093 Likes: 40 Albuquerque, NM K KSaraSara OP Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer
OP KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer K Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,093 Likes: 40 Albuquerque, NM	We're nearly there! Sara Kerth nominations are opening on March 3! 🏆2024 Kerth Award Posts 🏆. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, the show, life, and more! You can also find me on Tumblr and AO3. Avatar by Carrie Rene

Re: FDK: Away From the Sun 32 #29337 04/24/06 04:01 PM
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mariadferdez. Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,846 Puerto Rico	Hi, Great part. Maria D. Ferdez. --- Don't like Luthor, unfinished, untitled and crossover story, and people that promises and don't deliver. I'm getting choosy with age. MAF

Re: FDK: Away From the Sun 32 #29338 04/24/06 06:47 PM
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TOC Nobel Peace Prize Winner T Joined: Aug 2005 Posts: 5,797	I just have no time for proper feedback here, and the rest of the week looks just as bad, but I loved this chapter, Sara. I loved Clark waking up, wondering and doubting about him and Lois, and Lois's not very wordy but extremly eloquent assurance that she is not going anywhere, and then Clark's so poignant "I'm back" comment. I take it he means that now that Lois will stay with him, he is back to what he was when he was a child, when he was so hopeful, before death and loss had touched him. And I loved it that Elle would blush so hotly when she insisted that she was not "involved" with Henderson's agent! Ann

Re: FDK: Away From the Sun 32 #29339 04/25/06 01:03 AM
Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA ChiefPam Pulitzer
ChiefPam Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2003 Posts: 3,644 North Carolina, USA	Sweet scene with Clark and Lois... When did I join the party, you ask? Well, now that it's the last few parts I figure you can't break my heart anymore, so it's safe to dip my toe in the water Although of course you were just torturing Clark in the previous section... but if he's got his powers back, that'll take care of that little problem The stuff with Elle has me totally mystified, of course, but it's interesting nonetheless. I liked the bit where she tried to plead the Fifth <g> PJ "You told me you weren't like other men," she said, shaking her head at him when the storm of laughter had passed. He grinned at her - a goofy, Clark Kent kind of a grin. "I have a gift for understatement." "You can say that again," she told him. "I have a...." "Oh, shut up." --Stardust, Caroline K

Re: FDK: Away From the Sun 32 #29340 04/25/06 09:12 PM
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OP KSaraSara Boards Chief Administrator Pulitzer K Joined: Aug 2003 Posts: 3,093 Likes: 40 Albuquerque, NM	Thank you guys for the feedback!! Welcome to the party, Pam! Reading out of order, are we? Anyway, glad you enjoyed! And thank you Ann and Maria for the comments!! Part 33 up soon! Sara Kerth nominations are opening on March 3! 🏆2024 Kerth Award Posts 🏆. Join us on the #loisclark Discord server! We talk about fanfic, the show, life, and more! You can also find me on Tumblr and AO3. Avatar by Carrie Rene

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