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What can I say? I couldn't resist this idea.

All feedback welcomed.

Perhaps it was a mistake to read the FDK thread first, but I saw that twist coming. Very nicely done though. I've never had a dog, but I would be more of a dog person, just like your protagonist.

What a charming story! I did not see the twist coming.

Hi Barbara and Penny,

Barbara, thank you for your honesty. I only ever once had a dog -- when I was a child I had a miniature schnauzer. I would love to have another dog, but my son is petrified of them. I strongly suspect that if I were to adopt a dog, their meeting would result in one or both of them being injured -- or worse.

Penny, I'm delighted that the ending came as a surprise.

Joy,
Lynn

My beloved Dax, a yellow Lab, died a few years ago. She was simply the best. Thanks for the memories.

Hello Morgana,

You are most welcome. And thank you for the feedback. Labs are wonderful dogs -- beautiful and gentle. If only their lives were longer.

Be well,
Lynn