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Sorry for the long delay! RL, laziness, and lack of inspiration are my only excuses.  Yvonne
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ARRRGGGGHHHHH!  We want to know the big mystery too!  Great installment, loved the Dr. Klein revelation, please post more soon!
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Hi, Great part.  She and Clark gave the still-sleeping Jon a goodnight kiss and then they waited until CK had changed back into his street clothes and pushed the stroller through the door. As soon as he was gone, Lois turned back to Dr Klein. “Okay, what’s the big mystery?” What is the mystery?! You are 
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Yvonne, Very nice section . I absolutely LOVE Dr. Klein. “Sure. I’m a senior scientist at one of the country’s foremost research institutions – why shouldn’t I cope with step-by-step lessons on multiple identities?” he said. LOL.  Exactly. People should take more interest in science  . “Another Lois Lane?” he said with a touch of incredulity. “Isn’t one enough?” LOL! AAH! I really want to know what the mystery is!!! Please post the next part as soon as you can. - Alicia
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“Oh,” replied a deflated Klein.
“Dr Klein, can we get back to the point?” said Lois. “Nice though it is to be discussing your next vacation.” 
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Yvonne I'm so glad to see you posting again.  And WOW, an excellent part!  I can't wait to find out what the mystery is.  I love how CK realizes he needs to leave. Tricia 
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Yvonne, I think everyone did such a great job of telling you what a great part it is that I'll just add my heartfelt plea for more soon! Avia  (who would love to learn of any additional way or ways to convince Yvonne's muse to cooperate)
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Great, Yvonne's back with more Kidnapped! And this a great part. I kept laughing the whole time. Bernie just is wonderful, all the confusion around him...  I really hope there's a good solution for Clark's problem and that there will be a solution for Jon soon too. So post more soon! I missed this and have lots of free time soon! Saskia
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Lovely part. I liked it very much - Dr. Klein's reactions etc.. “Okay, what’s the big mystery?” Yes, Yvonne, what's the big mystery??? I love cliffhangers like these - as far as they don't last tooooooooo long! Post more as soon as possible. (Pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase!!) AnnaBtG.
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Hi Yvonne, I just caught up with this story and WOW  it is SO great! I really love how you've captured everyone's character so perfectly. I really enjoyed the scenes with Martha and Jonathan, wonderfully written!  ~Liz
Lois: Can I go?
Clark: No.
Lois: Oh come on, Clark, why do we go through this? We both know I’m going to go.
Clark: Then why do you ask?
Lois: I’m trying to be nice.
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Dr Klein’s gaze flickered between herself and Clark, then over to CK, and finally back to Lois again. “I don’t think I can tell you without discussing it with Clark first. Patient confidentially, you understand.”
“Oh.” Nonplussed, she glanced up at Clark. “But I’m his wife. We don’t have any secrets between us, do we honey?”
“No,” said Clark. “But...” He turned slowly to CK.
CK grimaced. “I can see I’m in the way here,” he observed dryly. “It’s okay,” More soon and thanks for sharing!
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Yvonne,
I'm glad you are posting again
great part
What's the mystery
more soon please
merry
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