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It NEVER ceases to amaze me how much emotional impact your short stories provide.

Excellent introspective from Perry and sadly so true.


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Well done! You captured Perry's voice perfectly. And I especially like the phrasing " his jobs- the Planet and the planet."

I look forward to any other vignettes or snippets (or, for that matter, longer stories) that you might choose to add to your series.

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Aww, I love it when Perry knows The Secret and gets all fatherly about it! Great writing, as always!


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Aww, I love it! This pairs so perfectly with "Professional Discretion" even with the big gap in time. I agree with Lynn, you've got Perry down pat. clap Well done, and I'd love to see this series continue.


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Love it! Once again, such powerful emotion in so few words. I particularly liked the Planet and the planet being used as his job descriptions. (Always did say Perry knew!) Awesome work! Can't wait to see whatever else you come up with!


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Hi Feli!
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They did it.

It’s taken secret identities, clones, resurrected sociopathic billionaires, scumbag doctors, electrified wedding rings and an honest-to-god alien invasion to get them to this point, but they did it.
So, Perry’s happy, huh?

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And I will. But not tonight.

Tonight I’m just gonna let them enjoy being in love.
For tomorrow, tomorrow they will learn that they cannot consummate until they have beaten the curse evil

PERRY: No, I do *not* have advice for that one.

wave Michael


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