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#279121 02/17/18 08:11 PM
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Feedback for Get It Right goes here... my response to the Kerth Challenge #6.

It’s Lois and Clark’s wedding day and someone close to them has a lot of thoughts on the subject.

Thank you.

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Nice take on his thoughts. Very much in character. Not identifying him more so I don't spoil the surprise. laugh



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Well done! I really enjoyed it.


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This was really good. It makes me think about how others see us and how counter to reality it can be. Thanks for sharing!

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Poor fellow.

An insightful piece.

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Originally Posted by cuidadora
Nice take on his thoughts. Very much in character. Not identifying him more so I don't spoil the surprise. laugh

Thank you. Sometimes I think Jimmy had such bad-luck in the love department because Clark didn't.

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Originally Posted by jackiek
Well done! I really enjoyed it.


Thank you, jackiek. I am glad you enjoyed it.

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This was really good. It makes me think about how others see us and how counter to reality it can be. Thanks for sharing!


Thank you, PuffyTiger. Its nice when we realize how others may see us or how others may see things differently even when reading a story.

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Poor fellow.

An insightful piece.

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Thank you, Lynn. Yes, no one realized how he always had the short end of the stick when it came to love.

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Hi CarrieRene!

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They couldn’t stand one another.

Then one day they didn’t fight as loudly.
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I don’t know if there’s any $scrooge McDuck fans out there, but still
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To this day Clark Kent is the only person to be partnered with Lois Lane and not request a transfer.
Well, he’s also the last person to be partnered with her.

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He never had the trouble with women I did.
Well…
LOIS: *squints*

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They either cheat on me, try to kill me,
I think Clark also ticks all those boxes.

You most definitely got it right!

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