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In Green Green Glow of Home the fight scene
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TRASK: “Go ahead. Kill me. I would have killed you.”
Clark throws Trask back in the water.
CLARK: “That's not how I work.”
Alternative junction
Rachel and Jimmy haven’t arrived when Trask stands back up. It is clear he’s fine, uninjured, he pulls his gun. Smiles and put it away.
Trask: “No, clearly it is not. Kent, I hope you are everything you appear to be. I hope there is no invasion force.” Hands him a business card blank except for a single phone number. “Call me if you need me. My apologies to your parents, and to Wayne. I had to be certain.”

Turns and walks away.

Flash forward to the arrival of the New Kryptonians invasion force.






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Wow. Talk about an alternative universe!


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Much better than the Man of Steel alternative:

TRASK: “Go ahead. Kill me. I would have killed you.”
CLARK (snapping Trask's neck) "All right. I will." peep

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Originally Posted by Framework4
In Green Green Glow of Home the fight scene
Quote
TRASK: “Go ahead. Kill me. I would have killed you.”
Clark throws Trask back in the water.
CLARK: “That's not how I work.”
Alternative junction
Rachel and Jimmy haven’t arrived when Trask stands back up. It is clear he’s fine, uninjured, he pulls his gun. Smiles and put it away.
Trask: “No, clearly it is not. Kent, I hope you are everything you appear to be. I hope there is no invasion force.” Hands him a business card blank except for a single phone number. “Call me if you need me. My apologies to your parents, and to Wayne. I had to be certain.”

Turns and walks away.

Flash forward to the arrival of the New Kryptonians invasion force.

Business card is for the Men In Black. laugh B39 was just a cover.


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Interesting challenge. I'll try something


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