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#278496 - 01/13/18 10:10 PM FDK: Stepping Into The Light (1/13)
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Pulitzer

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Here it is! The next installment of this trilogy. Enjoy!
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#278499 - 01/14/18 06:08 AM Re: FDK: Stepping Into The Light (1/13) [Re: Deadly Chakram]
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Awesome beginning Vicki! I love how you paint his first couple of days in Metropolis. Really enjoying your trilogy
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#278502 - 01/14/18 08:44 AM Re: FDK: Stepping Into The Light (1/13) [Re: NostalgiaKick]
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Originally Posted By: NostalgiaKick
Awesome beginning Vicki! I love how you paint his first couple of days in Metropolis. Really enjoying your trilogy


Thanks, Feli! I figured it might be a nice change of pace if Clark got the job on his first try. wink Glad you're enjoying the trilogy. I'm hard at work on the next fic - about 75% through.
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"It's all weird! We live in Metropolis!" ~ Jimmy Olsen

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#278517 - 01/14/18 11:36 PM Re: FDK: Stepping Into The Light (1/13) [Re: Deadly Chakram]
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Next story! Looking forward to part 2. smile
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#278532 - Yesterday at 12:26 PM Re: FDK: Stepping Into The Light (1/13) [Re: Deadly Chakram]
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Hi Vicki!

Love the additions you made to this chapter. You can really feel like you're in Clark's head experiencing Metropolis for the first time as he steps off the bus and takes the city in. **zips muzzle back up**

"I know nothing I swear!" huh **whistles innocently**
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#278537 - Yesterday at 09:07 PM Re: FDK: Stepping Into The Light (1/13) [Re: Lady Loisette]
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Originally Posted By: Lady Loisette
Next story! Looking forward to part 2. smile


Thank you! My plan is to update each weekend. smile
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"It's all weird! We live in Metropolis!" ~ Jimmy Olsen

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#278538 - Yesterday at 09:12 PM Re: FDK: Stepping Into The Light (1/13) [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Originally Posted By: folc4evernaday
Hi Vicki!

Love the additions you made to this chapter. You can really feel like you're in Clark's head experiencing Metropolis for the first time as he steps off the bus and takes the city in. **zips muzzle back up**

"I know nothing I swear!" huh **whistles innocently**


Thanks, Val! It was fun to take on a very different Clark, with very different experiences. At least he didn't have to stay at that creepy Hotel Apollo this time, at any rate! laugh
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