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hyper hyper hyper Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I LOVE this one!!!!

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rotflol Poor Clark!


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Mercy me... Continue please. Haha I made a funny. What would have happened if he would have went in there?

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Love it! Clark is so much stronger than he gives himself credit for. You've (as always) captured that so well in so few words. You have a true gift!

Happy birthday, Val!


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rotflol Fantastic! I love this. Short and a little bit hot. wink Shows a lot of Clark's character though. Great little piece!


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Clark, having morals is a blessing. Martha and Jonathan would be proud of you. The best part is, so will Lois when the drug wears off.

Yup, this was a great little ficlet!


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Belatedly...

Val- Yay, you liked your present! smile

Carrie- That may be a story for another writer lol. Maybe one of you n-ficcers? wink

Cuidadora- nice reaction lol

Vicki- thanks blush

Mouse- Kryptonian or not, he's still definitely a red-blooded male laugh

Morgana- As much fun as this story was, you're right. If he'd gone in there it would've been bad. Very bad.

Thanks everyone! Sorry it took so long to reply... RL happened and my muse has been distracted by sewing


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I like this look into Clark's head. It helps hit home that Superman isn't great because he's some better-than-us alien that's never tempted to do bad stuff, he's great because he's Clark, and Clark is a genuinely nice person.


"It is a remarkable dichotomy. In many ways, Clark is the most human of us all. Then...he shoots fire from the skies, and it is difficult not to think of him as a god. And how fortunate we all are that it does not occur to him." -Batman (in Superman/Batman #3 by Jeph Loeb)

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