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#276720 - 08/09/17 01:03 PM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Chapter 5 - Wow, Clark is seriously angry. Too funny that Lois finds it easier to contact Superman than Clark.

Chapter 6 - My head is spinning with how fast things occurred! Wow! Amazing how quickly Clark and Lois reconciled once they both talked or yelled at each other. Nice they can see each other's point of view... finally! clap

Ah, the A-plot comes back. A-plot Interruptus? rotflol Look forward to seeing both how you resolve this differently than the show and if there's THE Revelation.
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#276744 - 08/11/17 06:48 AM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: cuidadora]
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Kerth

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Originally Posted By: cuidadora
Chapter 5 - Wow, Clark is seriously angry. Too funny that Lois finds it easier to contact Superman than Clark.

Chapter 6 - My head is spinning with how fast things occurred! Wow! Amazing how quickly Clark and Lois reconciled once they both talked or yelled at each other. Nice they can see each other's point of view... finally! clap

Ah, the A-plot comes back. A-plot Interruptus? rotflol Look forward to seeing both how you resolve this differently than the show and if there's THE Revelation.


Hi cuidadora!

Thanks for reading and commenting. Yes, after all that fighting the making up had to be steamy wink All that pent up frustration with one another has to come out somewhere right?

Hope you enjoyed the ending. wave
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#276745 - 08/11/17 10:48 AM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Originally Posted By: folc4evernaday
Hope you enjoyed the ending. wave


Loved it!! clap
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#276788 - 08/21/17 05:31 AM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Teaser

Of course Clark shouldn't have gone to Lois' apartment after the dance! It only confused her that much more. How is the poor girl to get a grip on her relationship with Clark when he keeps stirring up confusion?

Ready to dive into this adventure!
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#276801 - 08/21/17 06:17 PM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: Morgana]
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Kerth

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Originally Posted By: Morgana
Teaser

Of course Clark shouldn't have gone to Lois' apartment after the dance! It only confused her that much more. How is the poor girl to get a grip on her relationship with Clark when he keeps stirring up confusion?

Ready to dive into this adventure!


Hi Morgana,

Yeah, it was quite a twisty web Clark wove himself by dancing with her as Superman and Clark in one night. Have fun reading!
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#276803 - 08/21/17 06:46 PM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: cuidadora]
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Originally Posted By: cuidadora
Originally Posted By: folc4evernaday
Hope you enjoyed the ending. wave


Loved it!! clap


Glad you enjoyed it. thumbsup
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#276808 - 08/21/17 10:12 PM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Finally got caught up on this one! Now I'm sad that there isn't any more. frown What happens when Clark tells Lois the secret? What happens to Mayson in this timeline? Did Lois and Clark ever pick up where they left off with their smooching? So many questions! I need answers!
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#276810 - 08/22/17 06:16 AM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: Queen of the Capes]
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Originally Posted By: Queen of the Capes
Finally got caught up on this one! Now I'm sad that there isn't any more. frown What happens when Clark tells Lois the secret? What happens to Mayson in this timeline? Did Lois and Clark ever pick up where they left off with their smooching? So many questions! I need answers!


I'm toying with a Sequel to this one...
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#276811 - 08/22/17 10:53 AM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Originally Posted By: folc4evernaday
Originally Posted By: Queen of the Capes
Finally got caught up on this one! Now I'm sad that there isn't any more. frown What happens when Clark tells Lois the secret? What happens to Mayson in this timeline? Did Lois and Clark ever pick up where they left off with their smooching? So many questions! I need answers!


I'm toying with a Sequel to this one...


Yay! hyper
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#276875 - 08/29/17 07:23 PM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Part one

Lois, that man is only interested in you, not some bubble head named Candi!

How do you expect to learn more about Ryan if you don't re-connect with Molly? The woman is hiding something.


Edited by Morgana (08/29/17 07:24 PM)
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#276878 - 08/30/17 07:04 PM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: Morgana]
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Originally Posted By: Morgana
Part one

Lois, that man is only interested in you, not some bubble head named Candi!

How do you expect to learn more about Ryan if you don't re-connect with Molly? The woman is hiding something.


LOL Morgana!

It's like Candi with an 'i' not a 'y' haha

Hope you're enjoying the fic. wave clap
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#276879 - 08/30/17 07:58 PM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Part Three

I am having a blast with this!

Ryan kidnaps Molly. Clark interfereswith Lois stakeout, so now Molly is in his clutches. But wait, there is more. Clark confronts Lois about her helping him get a social life! Unfortunately, before it gets good Mayson shows up! thud

This ain't your typical day at the office!


Edited by Morgana (08/30/17 07:58 PM)
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#276880 - 08/30/17 08:16 PM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Part Four

I really feel sorry for Mayson, she got the short end of that lunch. Poor girl had to pay for both of them.

Lois. Clark. Having a full fledged fight in front of the newsroom staff is a big no-no. Perry has a good point; this is no place to fight. Go out there and track down that strange lead, there is a paper to be set up!
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#276881 - 08/30/17 08:48 PM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Part Five

Yeah Lois, an uncomfortable conversation between you and a certain reporter is about to take place. Ouch.
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#276932 - 09/06/17 07:00 PM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Part Eight
Enjoyed this story bunches! Much better than original.
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#276935 - 09/09/17 12:25 PM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Really liked the story. Made me want to go back to the real episode and rewatch it. If only I had the time to really do that. sad

I think you portrayed Lois and Clark well. It's nice to see Angry!Clark every once in a while.

Thanks for sharing.
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#277020 - 09/22/17 07:08 AM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Sorry that I didn't take the time to comment on your story when I read it last month, but RL was crazy busy! laugh Totally loved your story, but was disappointed that there was no revelation until you let us know that you were doing a sequel clap !

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#277024 - 09/22/17 07:28 AM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: Superjan]
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Originally Posted By: Superjan
Sorry that I didn't take the time to comment on your story when I read it last month, but RL was crazy busy! laugh Totally loved your story, but was disappointed that there was no revelation until you let us know that you were doing a sequel clap !


RL has been a killer for everyone I think. Thanks for taking the time to comment.

Yeah, I wasn't sure what the name of the sequel was going to be then the more I thought about it the more it kinda morphed into a monster of it's own. This will be known as the 'Rules' series. I'm not rewriting EVERY episode of Season 2 but I'm selecting some of my favorites and rewriting them into this timeline and having some fun with them.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story and hope you have time to catch up on Rules of Trust. Chapter 3 is going up here in a few.
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#277025 - 09/22/17 07:33 AM Re: FDK: Guy Rule Number One [Re: folc4evernaday]
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Originally Posted By: bakasi
Really liked the story. Made me want to go back to the real episode and rewatch it. If only I had the time to really do that. sad

I think you portrayed Lois and Clark well. It's nice to see Angry!Clark every once in a while.

Thanks for sharing.


Hi Bakasi!

Glad you enjoyed this one.

Yeah, Clark is allowed to get angry every once in awhile. Lois definitely pushed him there in this one.

Originally Posted By: Morgana
Part Eight
Enjoyed this story bunches! Much better than original.


Hi Morgana!

Glad you enjoyed this one. It's kinda taken on a life of it's own now. lol wave
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