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FDK: If You Only Knew 3/15 #276678 08/04/17 03:21 PM
Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 571 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC CarrieRene OP Columnist
OP CarrieRene Columnist Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 571 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC	Thank you again for the feedback on this story. This is what I would call my epic, just not sure if its going to be epic long. Folc4evernday has really helped me out, so a huge thank you to her. Enjoy! I will aim to have another chapter by this time next week since I am going to start making the chapters longer.

Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 3/15 CarrieRene #276681 08/04/17 07:59 PM
Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,658 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast Morgana Pulitzer
Morgana Pulitzer Joined: Apr 2010 Posts: 3,658 Likes: 10 Somewhere on the East Coast	Quote Upon hearing of his father’s heart attack she couldn’t help but think it was fate bringing Clark Kent back into her life. Good grief! A good, kind man is laying in a hospital room after a heart attack and the only thing she can think of is that it will bring Clark back into her life? Talk about self-centered! Quote She was going to do everything in her power to make Clark see that they were worth fighting for. He needed her. She needed him. She just had to make him see that. Even if it meant spending the next month in Smallville. She had no idea what to do when it came to taking care of a farm but she’d figure it out soon enough. It couldn’t be that hard. The important thing was seeing Clark –helping him and Martha through this. She may ruin a few pairs of shoes in the process but she’d do it if it meant spending time with the man she loved. The Lois in this story is mature, bold and very deeply in love, so much so she is willing to put aside her career for awhile to help the man she loves. That's what being in love is all about; helping and loving the other person especially when experiencing trials like what Clark is dealing with now. Clark on the other hand was being a lunkhead until Lana's determination to insert herself back into his life scared some sense back into him. That girl does have a good reason for being around in this fic! Last edited by Morgana; 08/05/17 05:33 AM. Reason: Additional comments Morgana A writer's job is to think of new plots and create characters who stay with you long after the final page has been read. If that mission is accomplished than we have done what we set out to do, which is to entertain and hopefully educate.

Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 3/15 Morgana #276694 08/05/17 03:49 PM
Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL folc4evernaday Pulitzer
folc4evernaday Pulitzer Joined: Jan 2009 Posts: 4,025 Birmingham, AL	Originally Posted by Morgana Quote Upon hearing of his father’s heart attack she couldn’t help but think it was fate bringing Clark Kent back into her life. Good grief! A good, kind man is laying in a hospital room after a heart attack and the only thing she can think of is that it will bring Clark back into her life? Talk about self-centered! Quote She was going to do everything in her power to make Clark see that they were worth fighting for. He needed her. She needed him. She just had to make him see that. Even if it meant spending the next month in Smallville. She had no idea what to do when it came to taking care of a farm but she’d figure it out soon enough. It couldn’t be that hard. The important thing was seeing Clark –helping him and Martha through this. She may ruin a few pairs of shoes in the process but she’d do it if it meant spending time with the man she loved. The Lois in this story is mature, bold and very deeply in love, so much so she is willing to put aside her career for awhile to help the man she loves. That's what being in love is all about; helping and loving the other person especially when experiencing trials like what Clark is dealing with now. Clark on the other hand was being a lunkhead until Lana's determination to insert herself back into his life scared some sense back into him. That girl does have a good reason for being around in this fic! Lana: Enemy Number One Should make for an interesting twist. This one turned out really good. ~ Folc4evernaday Jodi Picoult - You might not write well every day, but you can always edit a bad page. You can't edit a blank page. https://loisclarktribute.com Subscribe on YouTube

Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 3/15 Morgana #276698 08/05/17 06:15 PM
Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 571 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC CarrieRene OP Columnist
OP CarrieRene Columnist Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 571 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC	Originally Posted by Morgana Quote Upon hearing of his father’s heart attack she couldn’t help but think it was fate bringing Clark Kent back into her life. Good grief! A good, kind man is laying in a hospital room after a heart attack and the only thing she can think of is that it will bring Clark back into her life? Talk about self-centered! Quote She was going to do everything in her power to make Clark see that they were worth fighting for. He needed her. She needed him. She just had to make him see that. Even if it meant spending the next month in Smallville. She had no idea what to do when it came to taking care of a farm but she’d figure it out soon enough. It couldn’t be that hard. The important thing was seeing Clark –helping him and Martha through this. She may ruin a few pairs of shoes in the process but she’d do it if it meant spending time with the man she loved. The Lois in this story is mature, bold and very deeply in love, so much so she is willing to put aside her career for awhile to help the man she loves. That's what being in love is all about; helping and loving the other person especially when experiencing trials like what Clark is dealing with now. Clark on the other hand was being a lunkhead until Lana's determination to insert herself back into his life scared some sense back into him. That girl does have a good reason for being around in this fic! Thank you. Lois is going to be more determined than anything to get to her man. Lana is going to be just as determined to get back her ex. Who will win?

Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 3/15 CarrieRene #276712 08/08/17 10:12 AM
Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada J jackiek Merriwether
jackiek Merriwether J Joined: Dec 2004 Posts: 1,702 Canada	Thank goodness he at least called her! Yay for Lois heading to Smallville although with so many parts left, something tells me it's not gonna be all sunshine and roses when she arrives. Still they belong together and there is no one botter to show him that than Martha, Lois herself and an annoying ex girlfriend. Looking forward to more! Superman: I hear you've been looking for me. Lois: All my life.

Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 3/15 jackiek #276718 08/08/17 08:59 PM
Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 571 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC CarrieRene OP Columnist
OP CarrieRene Columnist Joined: Jul 2017 Posts: 571 Likes: 12 Southern Pines, NC	Originally Posted by jackiek Thank goodness he at least called her! Yay for Lois heading to Smallville although with so many parts left, something tells me it's not gonna be all sunshine and roses when she arrives. Still they belong together and there is no one botter to show him that than Martha, Lois herself and an annoying ex girlfriend. Looking forward to more! Yes, there are a lot of sections left. It won't be all sunshine and roses, but Lois will put her foot down. Martha will help especially when it comes to that annoying ex. I am going to try and work on it some more this week.

Re: FDK: If You Only Knew 3/15 CarrieRene #276868 08/27/17 03:24 AM
Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California Mouserocks Kerth
Mouserocks Kerth Joined: Jun 2011 Posts: 2,131 California	Loving this story! I like how you're taking their relationship from different angles in your fics. This is a very difficult time for Clark and his turning away from Lois is never a good sign. Glad Lois is chasing him down. Quote Lana Lang was intense, bossy, and high maintenance. Nothing like the woman he loved back in Metropolis. This line got me . Nothing at all like Lois. Love really is blind, huh? At least in Lois' case, she's the good type of bossy and high maintenance. And of course Lana would butt in! Sigh. Quote She wasn’t going to lose him because he was being a lunkhead. A selfish lunkhead. Another apt description. Looking forward to reading more! Nothing spoils a good story like the arrival of an eye witness. --Mark Twain

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