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#275960 06/23/17 09:52 PM
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Feedback folder.

Trying to keep to a regular posting schedule now that my muse has been kickstarted.


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Bumping this back up. Sorry Feli. Read Chapter 11 Here

I'll come back to comment later... smile


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All good, sometimes things get buried! smile


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Ouch!

First, the people of Metropolis are booing Clark and now Luther finds some kind of pleasure in tormenting The Man of Steel.

Mr. Black blew up a children's hospital? This can only get worse.


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Okay, this is just too painful to break down and FDK along the way. Poor Clark!!! I just want to wrap him up in bubble wrap and hug him! Someone seriously needs to clobber that John Black character. Innocent children, really? And don't even get me started on Lex. Breaking Clark's leg? Really? Grrrrr..... splat wallbash

CLARK! TELL LOIS! TELL PERRY! TELL SOMEONE!!!!

And poor Martha.... whinging


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So. Why can't he talk with Bill Henderson or Dr. Klein? No man is an island! He is supposed to have Super wits! For crying out loud, use them!

There are other ways to beat Lex. Use financial means. Something!

At least Jonathan and Martha are out of harm's way. Right? Right? grovel


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Originally Posted by Morgana
So. Why can't he talk with Bill Henderson or Dr. Klein? No man is an island! He is supposed to have Super wits! For crying out loud, use them!

There are other ways to beat Lex. Use financial means. Something!

At least Jonathan and Martha are out of harm's way. Right? Right? grovel

I forgot all about Bill! Yes!!! Tell Henderson! He'll help him build a case against Luthor mwahaha clap hail

For crying out loud, TELL SOMEONE! Don't suffer in silence. wallbash


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Yeah, Clark is being frustrating. He's good at frustrating lol

Thanks for the comments smile More soon, I promise!


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