I was really enjoying this up until the very end. I love seeing peoples' perspectives on Clark and Superman without knowing they're the same person, so I found Lois' speculation about their relationship incredibly interesting. The very fact that I found this so intriguing is the very reason I found it disappointing to see Lois figure out the truth at the end. I am new to reading L&C fanfic and already I'm extremely tired of how in such a massive percentage of fanfics, Lois figures out Clark's secret identity, as I find it interesting to see them negotiate their relationship with that being unknown, and I have read barely any fanfics that handle the reveal better than the actual show does (and I don't even think the show's version was some super amazing, impossible-to-live-up-to standard). But that's just my personal preference that I can only assume isn't shared by many. This was still quite well-written, you did a good job, and I enjoyed it. I felt like I should bring up my issue if I'm going to comment on this, but don't let it get you down or anything. If it does get you down, read my review of Chapter 3 to get cheered up
